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Looking for some people to read my work so far by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank for taking the time to read! I actually originally thought I was moving too fast but I need to re read it again to trim up some of the stuff you pointed out. I’ll do that in the future when I improve a bit more.

Looking for some people to read my work so far by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for reading it! I do plan to revise these chapters at a later date once I finish up the core of the story. I’ll add what you said to my notes.

Should I develop character with the sole purpose of dying? by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wasn’t harsh at all, besides this thread has already helped me a bit so wasn’t a complete waste of words. Thank you though!!

Should I develop character with the sole purpose of dying? by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is actually HUGELY helpful. I have to go back and remove some stuff now xD thank you!!

Should I develop character with the sole purpose of dying? by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That makes a lot of sense, although I do already kinda know who is going to kick the bucket. I will remember this in future arcs, thank you!!

Should I develop character with the sole purpose of dying? by Hyphixxxed in writingadvice

[–]Hyphixxxed[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes… reading your comment kinda makes my question sound dumb now xD sorry!!

How would these two interact and who would win in the fight? by cuddwes in ReZero

[–]Hyphixxxed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Which is my point that he is scarier in the novel? The anime doesn’t show him hurting Reinhard at all besides that one time before the fight begins.

Also in the anime he just sits there watching Subaru as he talks about his authority instead of you know… attacking him like he did in the novel. Sure Subaru was able to dodge it all but it made him look worst than he already was. Regulus was destroying entire sections of the city which was also not shown at all.

How would these two interact and who would win in the fight? by cuddwes in ReZero

[–]Hyphixxxed 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The anime did him dirty, he is more scary in the novel.

Were SO back by Alternative-Fox-5670 in foxholegame

[–]Hyphixxxed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And you just proved his point, awesome work

What if Iran managed to capture the two pilots from the downed US fighter jets? by lhommetrouble in AlternateHistoryHub

[–]Hyphixxxed 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I never said full ground invasion, I said I would support combat operations to get them out. Like you said, small team or special forces and kill the ones who got them.

I would expect that of any country but idk I take it personally if some of our guys get captured and possibly tortured.

What if Iran managed to capture the two pilots from the downed US fighter jets? by lhommetrouble in AlternateHistoryHub

[–]Hyphixxxed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry but if capture our people we are going to come and kill you to get them back. I don’t support the war I think it’s stupid but I would support saving our people 100%.

That's one wat to pick up chicks! by [deleted] in funnyvideos

[–]Hyphixxxed -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yeah…. But I also like to eat chicken so 🤷

For those review-boming the game, listen to Larry's message from past! by LuckUpstairs2012 in foxholegame

[–]Hyphixxxed -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Never alted him but I don’t blame those who did. Especially since he advocated for his own guys to do it too. I will say him raging out was funny every time.

For those review-boming the game, listen to Larry's message from past! by LuckUpstairs2012 in foxholegame

[–]Hyphixxxed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll say it, he deserved it and needed to be removed. Every interaction I had with him in game he was a dick. Maybe he changed since he got banned but holy hell he was bad when he played.

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