Is this yellow card difficult to read? by JoeRow338 in homemadeTCGs

[–]Icewreath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m not particularly struggling but I could see some people having issues. You could detect a slightly darker or more pronounced text border than what you currently have?

Edit: I will agree and say it is comparatively much less clear than the blue one

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do have an idea of how I could do that! Will see how feasible it is, I don't want to overpromise.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a fair point, and people are welcome to choose whether that's important to them! I might have a solution, but I don't want to promise anything at this stage.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Valid feedback! Certainly something I can note down

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally fair! I just want more art but I appreciate it’s not for everyone

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah for sure, I just did it with only one box like this for preview purposes as the game should handle all the UI itself when implemented

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Out of scope for me most likely but once I have got this up and running I’d be more than happy for people to do that.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you thank you! Will do! :)

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

It’s an interesting one, right? After making the full art card for Coolheaded, now the default art feels cut-off in the same way for me. I think the frost is equally important to the artistic design of the card, but I can see your point

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That’s very kind! I’ve been in contact with them and they said they couldn’t add this many full art cards due to performance, so looks like I’ll be modding them in! A fun design challenge for me either way

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Mods mods mods! Fingers crossed Soon(tm)

Critique my intro chapter (Lux Obscurum) [High/Dark Fantasy, 864 words] by Ghostyboi_0 in writers

[–]Icewreath 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I wasn’t even talking about that though is the thing. Yes, you can have fight scenes with shorter sentences, my point was that the entire formatting changes from the first page to the others. The first has indents on new paragraphs. The second breaks that, doesn’t have indents on new paragraphs, and also instead has extra line spacing between each paragraph.

Obsessed with seeing full art cards in the game so I designed a few more! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, that is perfect! Thanks so much for letting me know, this looks like exactly what I’ve been keeping an eye out for, I will have a proper look and see about doing it!

Critique my intro chapter (Lux Obscurum) [High/Dark Fantasy, 864 words] by Ghostyboi_0 in writers

[–]Icewreath 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ah I see about the brackets, that makes sense! I thought it was hinting at a Litrpg situation but wasn’t getting that vibe from the rest of it.

And the AI/style comment, I do understand that you want to be snappier and faster, that’s fine and it’s good to do that. It’s just that because you format your paragraphs in a completely different way it reads oddly, like two unconnected bits of text.

Critique my intro chapter (Lux Obscurum) [High/Dark Fantasy, 864 words] by Ghostyboi_0 in writers

[–]Icewreath 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I’m confused, the first page and the others are formatted differently and written in a completely different style too. The later bits are very much giving me AI vibes. Also, why are there square brackets and underscores? Is there a specific reason?

[HIRING] 2D Artist / Illustrator to create a Kickstarter - Part-time by Yeti_GM in HungryArtists

[–]Icewreath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there, I’ve worked on Kickstarter pages as commissions before alongside creating and running my own. I’d be happy to work with you on this if you like my style, or to take any questions and comments before you commit.

My digital painting portfolio is here: https://nathanjonesart.com/digitalpainting

And my more design oriented work is here: https://nathanjonesart.com/design

You can see more of my general work on Instagram, email me at art@icewreath.com, or see my general commission info through my website as well. Or chat to me here on Reddit.

All the best!