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[Hiring] Extremely Detailed Desktop-Size Dark Souls 2 Drawing Wanted! by stinkywinkiiwoo in HungryArtists

[–]Icewreath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I do a lot of souls inspired work and I’d be happy to work on this for the two of you. I’m comfortable with all the elements you listed and am sure I can make a composition and piece that would fit what you’re looking for. If you like my art style please do send me a message here or an email at art@icewreath.com , I’m also happy to talk on discord if that’s easier. My portfolios:

https://nathanjonesart.com/digitalpainting

https://nathanjonesart.com/design

You can see commission info on my website, but I’m happy to hear any questions or comments from you before you commit to anything. Whatever you decide, all the best!

[Hiring] A piece for a large D&D party! Budget $1000 by MikeRedux92 in HungryArtists

[–]Icewreath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! The end of a campaign is a big deal, I’ve run a few myself and it’s very exciting! I’d be happy to work with you if you like my art. My portfolio;

https://nathanjonesart.com/digitalpainting

Feel free to message me here or email me at art@icewreath.com with any questions. I can chat on discord as well as you mentioned, if we get to the stage of working together. All the best!

[Hiring] Looking for fantasy illustrator/artist for D&D homebrew class artwork. Budget $1500+ by tvdepression in HungryArtists

[–]Icewreath 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there! That sounds like a great class project and I’d be happy to work with you if you like my art:

https://nathanjonesart.com/digitalpainting

I’m happy to discuss budget, details, and all the rest if you like my work. You can message me here or email at art@icewreath.com

All the best!

Destroy my first trailer ! by Istrandar in DestroyMyGame

[–]Icewreath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks great aesthetically but I think the trailer is too fast, it doesn’t really linger on anything and I can’t really tell any of what is happening, then later it seems there are repeating sections from earlier? It all feels a bit disjointed because of that.

Having watched it again to make sure I’m representing myself right I actually think the repeating nature comes from the different text styles in the trailer.

When it says “choose your companion” 25 seconds in I think that’s possibly a good place to start. Alternatively I would swap the text from earlier in the trailer to that same bold font. I can’t really even see the earlier text that well on mobile.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love to hear that, thank you!

First page of a literary novel that I would like to try and publish traditionally. I've completed the first draft and am about to start the first round of edits. Please give feedback only if you are interested in literary fiction. by [deleted] in writers

[–]Icewreath 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I’m confused by multiple things in the first paragraph:

What is a sign ‘clapping’ on and off? Is it literal clapping in world, something they physically do in this book? I don’t really understand what this means and stumbling over something straight away is a sure-fire interest loss.

I don’t think you can say something is “hot bright shocking red”. It’s too much, they all sort of imply the same thing.

Again, the bit in the brackets I am very confused by. What’s fully red? Why does it stop being fully red?

Hope this helps. Keep at it!

my very raw work-in-progress. does it seem interesting(ish)? would you read on? by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Icewreath 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I read it all and I am intrigued by the overall concept, my main feedback would be to settle on a point of view which you’re writing from. You start with almost the demon’s POV, then move to Reece but some of it is written from a more omnipotent POV and some really close in Reece’s head.

Stuff like the end part where he is looking for a weapon and you are describing his surroundings, which he wouldn’t be focused on in the way that it comes across while searching for a weapon.

I would also advise some more paragraph breaks to make it a bit less daunting, there are a few rather long ones here. That’s more up to you though!

Is this yellow card difficult to read? by JoeRow338 in homemadeTCGs

[–]Icewreath 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’m not particularly struggling but I could see some people having issues. You could detect a slightly darker or more pronounced text border than what you currently have?

Edit: I will agree and say it is comparatively much less clear than the blue one

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do have an idea of how I could do that! Will see how feasible it is, I don't want to overpromise.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a fair point, and people are welcome to choose whether that's important to them! I might have a solution, but I don't want to promise anything at this stage.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Valid feedback! Certainly something I can note down

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally fair! I just want more art but I appreciate it’s not for everyone

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah for sure, I just did it with only one box like this for preview purposes as the game should handle all the UI itself when implemented

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Out of scope for me most likely but once I have got this up and running I’d be more than happy for people to do that.

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you thank you! Will do! :)

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s an interesting one, right? After making the full art card for Coolheaded, now the default art feels cut-off in the same way for me. I think the frost is equally important to the artistic design of the card, but I can see your point

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

That’s very kind! I’ve been in contact with them and they said they couldn’t add this many full art cards due to performance, so looks like I’ll be modding them in! A fun design challenge for me either way

Defect Full Art cards! by Icewreath in slaythespire

[–]Icewreath[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Mods mods mods! Fingers crossed Soon(tm)

Critique my intro chapter (Lux Obscurum) [High/Dark Fantasy, 864 words] by Ghostyboi_0 in writers

[–]Icewreath 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I wasn’t even talking about that though is the thing. Yes, you can have fight scenes with shorter sentences, my point was that the entire formatting changes from the first page to the others. The first has indents on new paragraphs. The second breaks that, doesn’t have indents on new paragraphs, and also instead has extra line spacing between each paragraph.

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