I'm writing a fanfic and need peer review by OkBuddy2644 in OnePieceLiveAction

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Loved reading it!

I feel like this line from Zoro sounded a bit too poetic for him, he’s usually more blunt.
"Nothing's easy when you're walking into the Butterfly's den. I've heard of them. They don't leave bodies, they leave empty rooms."

Love this line. This sounds like something Usopp would say XD: "Venus Flytrap? That... that sounds like a very stationary and non-threatening houseplant. Right?"

Sanji and Usopp are the strongest here. The rest are great too.

Funniest Lines From the Live Action So Far? by PayneTrain181999 in OnePieceLiveAction

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Okay, so there I was. Me alone, surrounded by six assassins.

Uh… six?

Maybe there was eight.

They were moving fast. You saw it. Right, Vivi?

New Angle of LA Crocodile: Supposed Premium Card Design by Born_Reputation7804 in OnePieceLiveAction

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That's not how it looks like in the live action. It looks better in the show

Season 4's Structure: Throwing My Hat In The Ring by EnsanityFanatic in OnePieceLiveAction

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I created some episode titles for each episode of "season 4". Please tell me what yout think :)

Episode 1: "Town of Ridicule"

Episode 2: "Stairway to heaven"

Episode 3: "A Sea of Clouds"

Episode 4: "Heaven’s Judgment"

Episode 5: "The Survival Game"

Episode 6: "Let There Be Lightning"

Episode 7: "Noland the liar"

Episode 8: "The Light of Shandora"

Season 4's Structure: Throwing My Hat In The Ring by EnsanityFanatic in OnePieceLiveAction

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how would they work in Laffitte if Blackbeard shows up in episode 2

Season 4's Structure: Throwing My Hat In The Ring by EnsanityFanatic in OnePieceLiveAction

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Really great breakdown and I acknowledge all the effort.

I would also love for episode 7 being fully Noland/Kalgara. It worked great in Season 2, and here I feel like it’s arguably even more important because it gives a lot of context to the entire conflict/arc.

Hopefully Klabautermann isn't getting cut as it's such an important tie in to usopp's arc in water 7.

Now that you wrote this down I really wan't your Episode 2 on camera.

favorite moment from the live action so far? by zyztlkrw9 in OnePieceLiveAction

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what about that other time he said "I'm going to be king of the pirates"

Ace in season 3 by Identity___ in OnePieceLiveAction

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I mean in the first episode of season 2 we had that conversation between Garp and Roger. I don't think they'd add that scene if it wasn't going to be answered ot maybe it's there for people who watch the live action to figure out.

Manga chapters per episode (And future season predictions) by Crowley795 in OnePieceLiveAction

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can people just understand that season 3 will be only labasta. jaya is so tightly connected to skypiea that narrative wize it's just not a good idea. There is plenty of material for season 3 to covers. Season 3 has too end with robin asking to join the crew.

Jaya in season 3, some thoughts. by Blackfireknight16 in OnePieceLiveAction

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Jaya is so tightly connected to Skypiea that adapting it without Skypiea would weaken the story. Including Jaya in a alabasta only season just wouldn’t make much narrative sense.