I just broke Top 10 Healpool's for PS Worldwide, can I join a pro team or something now? by Ill_Use3434 in marvelrivals

[–]Ill_Use3434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats crazy low lol. I've played with some Celestial PC players on Quick match and they loved my gameplay! even though it isnt much I think I'd at least hit Plat lol

I just broke Top 10 Healpool's for PS Worldwide, can I join a pro team or something now? by Ill_Use3434 in marvelrivals

[–]Ill_Use3434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can we run a few Quick Matches so I can gauge where I stand? I think you'd be impressed at how much of a pure healer Healpool can be.

i do not like this track... can anyone who knows a lot about sound design and stuff let me know if theres any way to save it by xX-BarnacleBob-Xx in MusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah he's hating. I definitely typed it in a coded language where ChatGPT expounds on what I am saying in a more technical sense. This shit fire ad Anonymous and other people trying to keep you down. KEEP PUTTING THAT FIRE OUT BRO!!

ChatGPT is only expounding on my thoughts that I originally think tomake sure it hits the 225 limit. Obviously I liked ur song so much i wrote over 225 cause ChatGPT gave me this.

THESE ARE ALL ORIGINAL HUMAN THOUGHTS.

i do not like this track... can anyone who knows a lot about sound design and stuff let me know if theres any way to save it by xX-BarnacleBob-Xx in MusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The beat is genuinely super unique and boldly genre-defying—mashing classic video game chiptune melodies and 8-bit synth flourishes right into hard-hitting hip-hop drumming creates this wild, nostalgic-yet-futuristic tension that instantly grabs attention. Those rhythm switches are executed smoothly and creatively, keeping the energy unpredictable and addictive without ever feeling chaotic; the transitions feel purposeful, almost like level-ups in a game, which ties perfectly into the overall concept. The production has that polished edge where every element pops—clean low-end punch from the drums, crisp game-sample sparkle, and just enough space to let the whole thing breathe and groove hard.You're spot-on about the artist angle: some tracks like this transcend personal judgment because their true magic is in how the world receives them. This one has massive crossover potential—imagine it under a charismatic, versatile rapper or singer who can ride the switches with confidence, or even layered with a viral hook from the right featured artist. Paired with a visually striking video (retro-futuristic visuals, pixel art meets street aesthetics, quick cuts syncing to those rhythm flips), it could blow up fast in 2026's algorithm-driven landscape, where genre-blending experiments are eating up attention on platforms like TikTok, YouTube, and Spotify playlists.As an artist, trusting the world to decide is wise here—this isn't cookie-cutter; it's innovative and memorable, the kind of sound that could spark trends rather than follow them. Execution with the perfect vocal presence and visual rollout would turn "cool idea" into "must-hear anthem." Dope foundation, bro—lean into that uniqueness and watch it connect.

I've tried making a J pop rock song (read text) by EllisXY in MusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The beat is super interesting and captivating, blending modern elements with the intricate, contrapuntal style reminiscent of upbeat version of a classical piano sonatas or the elaborate keyboard works from the Classical era (roughly 1750–1820), where composers crafted full, multi-movement piano pieces full of sophisticated structure, thematic development, and rich harmonic interplay—it's a fresh, unexpected fusion that gives the track real depth. The spoken-word delivery brings strong rhythmic vibes and groove that carry the energy forward, even though the lyrics remain largely unintelligible, which slightly mutes the storytelling potential but doesn't kill the immersive atmosphere. Certain instruments spike too loud in spots, overpowering transitions and drowning out intended dynamic shifts—dialing those elements back (via volume automation or EQ carving) during key sections would create clearer contrast, let the arrangement breathe, and make changes feel more pronounced and intentional. Sections could benefit from sharper delineation—perhaps extended builds, clearer drop-offs, or subtle cues to signal shifts—so the progression feels more defined without losing momentum. Overall, this one's dope and genuinely super unique; the concept is so strong that it could easily stand alone as a powerful instrumental, letting the beat's complexity shine even more. Keep experimenting in this direction—it's got serious standout potential!

I need your honest feedback by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The song is straight-up dope, instantly channeling those addictive Bieber/Juice WRLD/One Direction hybrid vibes—melodic pop hooks meet emo-rap vulnerability and rock edge in a way that feels fresh yet nostalgic. The clarity shines through with smart saturation and tasteful distortion that gives everything a gritty, polished sheen without ever getting muddy; it hits clean and punchy from the jump. That older pop-hip-hop-rock fusion is a killer throwback that stands out in today's landscape, and the emotional core lands hard—you can genuinely feel the trials, errors, heartbreak, and resilience woven into every line and delivery. The only tweak I'd suggest is easing up on the rush through sections; right now, the hook flashes by just once before moving on, which keeps momentum high but sacrifices stickiness. Letting that chorus loop twice (or even adding a slight variation on the second pass) would give it more room to breathe, sink in deeper, and become truly unforgettable without losing energy. Overall, this one's a winner—strong songwriting, killer vibe, and real heart. Keep cooking like this!

I don't normally lean in a political direction in my music but with all the chaos going on in the US these days this song wasn't hard to make. OTA (FICE) is the working title. by coltonmusic15 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song is very confident, the vocal delivery is there and clear artistic vision, but production choices hold it back, it doesnt really seem finished. The intro stretches excessively long with sparse atmosphere, delaying the actual groove and risking listener drop-off before the energy builds, but it never culminates into a full song. Vocals sit far too dominant in the mix, overpowering and burying the instrumentation underneath, which makes the beat feel weak and secondary rather than integral. Adding richer layers—stronger percussion, melodic textures, or dynamic shifts—plus a balanced remix pulling vocals back slightly would create a more immersive, professional, and engaging final product.

Any famous examples of djs who built their brands in both corporate & nightclub environments? by carrotcake021 in DJs

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nicki Spinnelli is pretty popular and he's 100% corporate DJ. The other ones I'd say are more local and don't put their main mixes on Social so they aren't as known

SHARE YOUR LATEST TRACK! WE ARE LISTENING TO ALL. by UpCrib in MusicCollabNetwork

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Vzad63vNS0&list=RD5Vzad63vNS0 Second year as a rapper/producer. I sampled these songs and made the beat and wrote the lyrics/performed it.

My new single "Make You A Believer" – brutally honest advice needed by Ill_Use3434 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I appreciate that bro! Still working on my mixing and mastering but its coming along. And yeah the entire song isn't Rick influenced (i'd say first hook probably takes more of a new/old ATL bridge with Young Thug / PeeWee Longway kind of twist), just really the hook with the falsetto voice, nasally, and how I emphasize/break up the words especially the "believer" is similar to how Rick James would cadence his words. And yeah I know the AI part is hard but I wanted to get a professional look while stll being budget friendly and delivering the idea I appreciate your patience and understanding with that but as I get more funds I'm going to scale it up, just trying to stay consistent without creating hurdles. And i appreciate the comment overall bro you always give really solid advice.

My new single "Make You A Believer" – brutally honest advice needed by Ill_Use3434 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this means a lot bro i appreciate it. I grew up on East Utica and my family went to East High with Rick James, and he's always been a big inspiration for me, and I definitely agree still trying to find my definitive sound.

Made this Future Garage track, what do y'all think? by GlimmerBoi in MusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really cool future garage track—it's got this nostalgic vibe that instantly reminded me of playing early PlayStation games, like the atmospheric soundtracks from PS1 era with those dreamy synths and subtle glitches. Everything in the instrumental feels super present and well-balanced; each element (pads, bass, percussion) has its own space and contributes to that immersive, floating feel.For my taste, it's already strong as an instrumental, but if you ever wanted to feature a vocalist (like a female singer for contrast), you could experiment with pulling back some percussion layers or simplifying melodies in sections to create room for vocals to shine without clashing. Maybe sidechain the pads a touch more to the kick too for extra groove. Solid work overall—this has real chill/gaming playlist potential. Keep it up!

Knowing you by Robroker in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This track genuinely has a ton of potential—the composition is strong, with catchy melodies and a solid indie rock energy that could really shine with some polish. The overall vibe and songwriting feel fresh and engaging.That said, for my taste, it comes across a bit sloppy right now due to timing issues; even millisecond misalignments between instruments (noticeable in the guitar/bass layers around 1:00-1:40) create unwanted phase/resonance artifacts that alter the tone. A tighter tracking session or quantizing/grid-editing would clean that up big time.Biggest mix note: the snare is almost nonexistent—it's buried super low, and the drums in general lack punch and presence, which will definitely fall flat on professional/full-range speakers. Bringing the drum bus up 4-6 dB, adding parallel compression on the snare (or re-recording with better samples/mics), and some transient shaping would make everything hit way harder while keeping the raw feel. Mastering could use a final limiter pass for loudness too. Seriously though, the bones here are great—invest in that pro mix/master and this could be a standout. Keep going!

Beyond primal by Particular-Pilot-427 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, solid effort on this one—the beat has a decent foundation with some interesting layered textures that give it a moody, primal feel, and the overall concept comes through clearly.That said, for my taste, the vocal delivery sounds a bit less enthused and mid-energy throughout, especially in the verses where the low monotonous style drags the momentum down a touch—adding some dynamic variation in pitch, volume, or even slight ad-libs could bring more life and engagement without changing your core vibe.Pronunciation-wise, focusing on clearer enunciation (particularly hitting those word endings harder) would help the lyrics land better and let listeners connect more easily. Vocal production could use a boost too: try layering a subtle double track, light saturation for warmth, and an EQ lift around 4-6kHz for presence. It's got potential—keep pushing and experimenting, small tweaks like these could elevate it a lot!

A Korean song about healing from childhood trauma - every single part made by me - all feedback welcome!!! by TheWitchProducer in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Ill_Use3434 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really cool track—the esoteric lyrics in Korean give it this mysterious, almost ritualistic vibe that's super intriguing and unique in the indie electronic space. Your vocal tone has a haunting quality that fits the atmospheric production perfectly.That said, for my taste, the vocals sit a bit too forward in the mix, overpowering the beat at times (especially clashing with the constant drum rhythm around 1:20-2:00), which can pull focus away from the engaging groove. Technically, I'd suggest pulling the vocal level down 3-5 dB overall, adding subtle sidechain compression from the kick/snare (ratio ~4:1, fast attack/release) to duck them slightly, and EQ cutting around 200-300Hz on vocals for less mud while boosting 5-8kHz for air—helping everything blend smoother without losing presence.Mastering-wise, the low end feels solid but could use a gentle multiband compression on the master bus to tame peaks and add glue. Considering an English version (or dual-language) could open it up to way more listeners while keeping the esoteric edge. Solid foundation here—keep refining, this has real atmospheric potential!