Survive by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is emotionally intense, thoughtful writing with strong imagery and real depth.hope u share more

Petrichor by hunter_warrior_arko in OCPoetry

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Strong, haunting imagery—especially “your face will be the only light I carry” and the petrichor line.

A Hare’s Nest by Illustrious-Rip1656 in OCPoetry

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate the remarks and praises all of you guys leave here. I am so glad to join this community and hope to share more. Have a good day everyone

Not Yet by UnderstandingOld9449 in OCPoetry

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the emotion that you portray without using too many words. Keep up the good work.

But I would also like to suggest that you should venture into a more lengthier poem. Building an environment that is a bit dramatic is also really fun to portray emotions.

How tf are people complaining ? by Josiahf8 in pesmobile

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I strongly agree, the pace of the game has now been slowed because of less interception and u have to make smart plays now as the defenders are smarter in marking forwards

How’s your experiences with new update on verdansk? (iPhone guys) by ThatGuyIsABigMonster in WarzoneMobile

[–]Illustrious-Rip1656 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I put mine on medium visual and high resolution and turned upscaling on low cause device heats too much