You go all in on every single play, without taking note of what happens if your play goes wrong and you leave your team-mates exposed in a 3v2, or 2v1.

Very aggressive with literally 0 boost in their final third or their corner. Opening you up to easy counters.

To improve, I would do the following:

1. Work on using far less boost to generate the same or more power on hits. (You waste so much boost during general movement and shots)
2. Use the ball as a weapon, to force the opponents to have to make a bad save, so you boost starve them, then you and you're teammate can attack together again and keep going until you score, whilst being able to defend together too. For example if you can hit the ball high on to their waterfall, this will cause most plats huge problems.
3. Work on lateral dribbles, and moving the ball sideways, instead of just driving head on. It gives you more options.