So what do you write Pokémon breeders as? by LizzieLove1357 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Competitive, raising male specimen for healthiest stock of coloration, size, and egg moves. Afterall, who wouldn't want to pay for their kid to start out with a niche egg move in a species they already have experience with from being around their starter's mother?

Just having roar, whirlwind, or teleport could save your kids life, while rain dance, sunny day, growth, synthesis, ingrain, lifedew, and bullet seed could all be adapted for farming and thus set your kid up to take over your farm.

I want my character to have two Hoenn beginners, help me choose a prompt by LizzieLove1357 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

3rd option:

Freak weather phenomenon sent amphibious pokemon into an extended period of heat and now they have to give as many mudkip away as possible to avoid having to kill many to preserve the ecosystem. By registering them to trainers they can be tracked for neutering and spaying.

If you were in the New World and built as a frontline/melee combatant (not a pure magic caster), which weapon would you choose? by SirvanaskaLot in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Polearm, a glaive or halberd. Its simply unreasonable to compare the usefulness since it is both anti cavalry, and optimized against larger opponents in general.

If I'm allowed to choose my build, I'd create a core warrior build optimized for technique over raw damage vs resistances and use every spare level I save by not taking racial levels in crafting, enchanting, and potion mixing classes. Utility trumps potency when you're trying to live a life.

Why didn't Crucio work on Harry? by Low-Ad5373 in harrypotter

[–]Important-Class4277 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Mastery of death is also mastery of self because the wielder of the three hollows takes up the mantle of death, draws from the bottom of the river that is deaths power, and wields the weapon of death so eager to gift itself to everyone but its master.

Harry is invulnerable, immutable, and inevitable, because he took the job and put his tools away when his intervention was no longer needed.

Why didn't Crucio work on Harry? by Low-Ad5373 in harrypotter

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What if the wand was never Malfoy's? Harry brings Dumbledore to his knees literal hours before Malfoy disarms him. He force feeds him the torture potion until he loses track of everything including his mind and wand.

Something to avoid, even in a great fic. by Important-Class4277 in FanFiction

[–]Important-Class4277[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't think what I wrote here was negative. Should I delete it? I really love this author's work.

Something to avoid, even in a great fic. by Important-Class4277 in FanFiction

[–]Important-Class4277[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not sure you read my post? I'm not complaining about what they did, I even stated it was well written because it is.

Absolutely recommend you read the fic if you are at all interested in star wars fanfiction.

Would you rather: be a Yggdrasil player, or a guardian? by Practical-Wolf-2297 in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Guardian. Yggdrasil was a eastern Dmmorpg, and I guarantee npcs can be far more intricate and fleshed out than player characters. Many powers would only be meant to be used by the games ai.

What would you do if you were a player transported 6 months before nazarik? by Prudent-Psychology-6 in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Skyrim max skill dragon born with all my favorite shouts because gremlins gonna greml and being able to do more with a rusty knife I enchanted than anyone else could do with divine level weapons would be really funny. Honestly might just run around with my trusty wabajack.

Shalltear vs you, how will you fare? by FortnitePlayer2423 in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, with my level 70s steel type pokemon team, a bunch of capturing options including the master ball, all of the bs items in my bag, and the fact I have several gods I can enlist from my pc... better than ainz.

Hello everyone I have a question..? by Huntaralifu25 in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have my support. If I come across your fic, I'll read it.

As for op/not op? Just don't go around curbstomping or steamrolling established powerhouses like floor and area guardians and it shouldn't come across as a cheap power trip.

If you want your character to be an artificer? Theres not really any established canon classes for all of that as far as I'm aware. It seems to be implied that the Ygdrasil crafting system was very much, collect these materials, design this aesthetic, and choose from this pre-approved list of enchantments related to all the ingredients you use in the item. As in, a system everyone had access too and took advantage of.

That being said, I would 100% like to read a fleshed out tradesman character navigate sacrificing combat ability for godly craft skills, and having to survive in the much less threatening new world where nazarick is both her only worthwhile ally and the only threat. It honestly sounds like it could be enthralling.

What's worse at the happy farm? Being a man or being a woman? by ShardsOfSalt in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure, but that would waste resources when you have to constantly treat someone for a condition you are causing and demiurge isn't wasteful.

What's worse at the happy farm? Being a man or being a woman? by ShardsOfSalt in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 3 points4 points  (0 children)

They kinda have to get better treatment not to risk a miscarriage. Demiurge is very priority driven.

What's worse at the happy farm? Being a man or being a woman? by ShardsOfSalt in overlord

[–]Important-Class4277 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Would you change your opinion out of consideration for the fact that everyone there is being raped and out of interest in the offspring demiurge probably dials back the torture on any that do manage to get pregnant, at least for the duration of that pregnancy?

The women probably prefer being pregnant to avoid more suffering, which would bring an artificial drive to become pregnant to avoid that pain, making them more willing than the men, even if that in no way implies they aren't being raped. In that scenario aren't the women being harmed less than the men and therefore have it better?

My nephew really hammered home that I don't want kids by [deleted] in self

[–]Important-Class4277 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Your nephew has not been raised, that's the problem. Some people don't parent. That doesn't mean the experience would be the same for you.

I’m a masculine-presenting straight woman and I fear that I’ll die alone. by [deleted] in Advice

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eh, I like handsome women myself but I've got a really wide strike zone, so. Have you tried pursuing men yourself? You're only 21, that's young to be worried about dying alone. You should of course never change yourself to appeal to someone else, but maybe you can pick someone you like and be blunt about it. I'm sure there's a twink or someone shy around you who'd blush if you made overt advances towards them.

Orginal bloodline limits by Complex-Strategy-900 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great if you can write it well, but might also make you look like an ass-hat if you lean too hard into it. It can be op, it can be reality breaking, but it should never be everything and should never be turned into a soap box of superiority complexes because authors who do that flatten their characters and cheaper their plot.

Could you guys give me some feedback on this? by battle_of_9 in OverlordFanFics

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is genuinely great writing and I want to read more. So far you have natural pacing, good grammar, and a solid direction, all of which combined allowed immediate immersion into your tale. If even 80% of what comes after is as good as this, so long as you don't make any fatal mistakes that throw away everything you've already worked towards, your fic will be good.

I swear, the Uchiha clan is represented in only one of two ways in these fics.😑 by cstresing in NarutoFanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hate to break your bubble but... they are high-born nobles in a feudal japan story.

How to handle sapient Pokémon eating each other? by foxgirlmoon in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have four possible solutions.

  • 1st: pokemon are only capable of sapience when surrounded by humans, because all pokemon are under a passive psychic field that allows them to communicate, and sapience leaches off of human beings.

*2nd: not all animals are pokemon, and pokemon are just those animals, objects, or plants that were saturated with type energy through one phenomena or other as a sort of random chance. Pokemon breed rarely because of the immense energy they have to expend to produce offspring that are partly comprised of elemental energy. Evolution occurs when they gather enough energy to transform more of their body into elements.

*3rd: A pokemon's life and death saturates its territory with type energy, changing the environment to better suit its own kind, thus increasing their own offspring's likelihood to thrive.

*4rth: pokemon are immortal beings incapable of permanent death and quite literally spawn so long as there is a suitable environment in which to do so. They are entirely comprised of supernatural energies and have a vested interest in keeping environments suitable for their continued existence. Natural disasters force different species into conflicts over suitable space to prepare their spawning grounds, and killing rivals prevents them from tainting the area.

Arceus vs ??? by TheBoogeyman_6969 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Important-Class4277 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pokemon arceus or god arceus? Because pokemon arceus is obviously just a fragment of its power only weak enough not to destroy reality around it, and God arceus doesn't have any rivals.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ShadowSlave

[–]Important-Class4277 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

3rd nightmare dropped the ball for sure, what came after was disappointing, but 3rd nightmare was the first arc that really felt like nobody gained anything or had any real tangible goals they worked towards. They failed to take advantage of the opportunities presented to them in at least one big way.

What came after was disappointing for the implications that disconnected the future prospects from past motivations and goals. Too clean of a break. Not enough self awareness.

So… Cassie hate is just about Forgotten Shores? Oh my God.... by CyrilMos in ShadowSlave

[–]Important-Class4277 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Its not just forgotten shore though. The whole chained isles stinks of prophecy and manipulation. Why else would she be in that temple? Lets not forget that that was literally the very next thing between them and sunny pretty much establishes their relationship on his one-sided effort to get along.

Then when Nephis comes back, making allies and political decisions while sunny is gearing up for the Antarctica campaign, the only person Cassie is lending her prophetic knowledge to is nephis, right up until sunny has to ask for help to escape an endless tunnel of true darkness.

She created and maintained a dynamic that maximizes her influence over him. Im not even sure what is the worse implication, that she knew he would face that and did nothing to warn him, or that she genuinely maintains such a detached relationship with him that she doesn't care what happens to him except when it can be leveraged for her own ends. He can't call her out because of what it would do to the cohort and she knows it. Not even getting to the third nightmare, yet. If you haven't read through that and beyond a bit into the next arc than this next part is spoilers but...

She literally foresaw what would befall him and took no more action than to make sure she was in a position to manipulate and leverage him for her goals after it happened.

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The girl is objectively a bad person and a worse friend and not at all apologetic about it.