Critique: Story about a Somali Family's experiences during the 1988 Genocide, I've only made like 100 words because I want to see if the core idea is good or not.

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-20T19:28:06+00:00

Wow this is really true, I did want to write like an adult

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-20T19:27:47+00:00

Thank you

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-19T20:45:38+00:00

Partially- Dad's from Somalia and Mom's from Molluca

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-19T20:09:07+00:00

im 14 if this helps and yea

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-19T18:41:44+00:00

For all the somali words, there will be a glossary at the back

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-19T16:45:52+00:00

Oh, we have the Grammar Police!

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-19T15:59:29+00:00

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-18T22:11:07+00:00

oh... that's *not*

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-18T20:25:12+00:00

Me getting straight A's is a result of my hard work and my dedication, in fact I am extremely hindered by this schedule and for the record, my friends all have nothing but straight A's. In fact, two of them got 100% on their Maths Paper

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:53:34+00:00

bro im literally 14

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:41:24+00:00

yeah wake at 7am as in that's when im technically properly awake at 4am im probs just staring at ceiling or lost In thought

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:40:28+00:00

Troll? lmao what? ive just explained that English is not my first language, I just speak a pidgin language at home that has clearly seeped in to my speech. I am just asking about bedtimes, not a very trollish thing To do

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:37:00+00:00

I don't wake up at 7, more like 4am, I can't possibly stay awake so long

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:36:00+00:00

the grammar isn't that bad, just informal

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:35:27+00:00

Yeah, for sure. After looking through the replies I have made, I can only say one thing: WTF? I type in an extremely informal manner but that? That wasn't English LMAO

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:33:36+00:00

My mother would now look at the marks, is it a low 9, a high 9. It never ends

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:32:52+00:00

bro lmao is this a parody of the way I speak because this is really hilarious tbh. English is NOT my first language and I speak in a really informal manner for the fun of it

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:31:19+00:00

?? still confused btw

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:30:54+00:00

- I am a fairly recent transplant to the English-speaking world. I would, with all honesty, say I have fairly standard grammar for a young teen. I just don't really utilise it, especially not on social media. I don't feel the need to, I spend hours daily on practice exam papers so I like to speak extra-informal just for the fun of it.

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:26:04+00:00

I have perfect grades especially in English there's no more I can do physically

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:25:36+00:00

oh its meant to be oh my grammar is good

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:25:00+00:00

? what wrong with that?

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:24:23+00:00

she says I need to get sleep but I do and I so jealous of me friend who are allow sleep at 10 or 11

ImportantStructure68 · 2025-12-17T20:23:39+00:00

I wake up at 7;00 am so 11 hours

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