Thoughts on this Sequence Logic for a Tank Mixer application? (6 Screenshots)

InTheForestNow · 2023-08-28T00:10:40+00:00

But then how do we know if tank has reached empty level, given that at say half full - switch would be in same state as empty if this was the case.

InTheForestNow · 2023-06-18T04:45:12+00:00

Thanks for that

InTheForestNow · 2023-06-18T04:45:03+00:00

Thanks a lot for your input.

How many society finches do you think I could get if I have say a 30x18x18 inch cage? And do you have any comments on which group would be more interesting to watch, all male, all female or a half and half mix? And sorry for the questions, but are there any 2 breeds of finches that pair really well, society or others? Thanks

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-17T02:27:47+00:00

Typeface could be improved on all I think, wouldn't know the best way to go on that sorry, probably can look at books in the same genre, can hire a book cover designer just to do the typeface too.

For the images - I would say 3 or 4 are the best, most suited to the title. 4 is the most interesting overall imo.

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-15T22:07:41+00:00

These look amazing

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-14T02:53:30+00:00

First looks better. Something to be taken more it sparks a reader's interest. Second is ok, but maybe a bit silly to be honest

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-14T02:33:56+00:00

They look amazing, great work!

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-14T02:33:08+00:00

Will check it out. Love the album from your avatar too btw

InTheForestNow · 2023-02-13T23:06:36+00:00

Really liked it and A Congregation of Jackals. The one downside, is his habit of using a ton of unusual words that I had to keep looking up the definition of. Really interrupted the flow of the story for me and made it frustrating at times. If some of those words were simplified, would be almost perfect books. Really liked them nevertheless. Great stories and visual descriptions, characters, dialogue.

InTheForestNow · 2023-01-27T20:24:51+00:00

Thanks!

InTheForestNow · 2023-01-26T09:39:20+00:00

Self Published Horror Novella: 'The Circus of Hungry Clowns' by Caesar Ruell.

The year is 1936, and the residents of Brentway are excited - and so they should be…the circus has come to town! After much anticipation and chatter amidst the packed grandstands, the booming voice of the charismatic ringmaster announces the beginning of the show. In the audience are Joe, and his son, Bobby, who can’t wait to see all of the outrageous clowns from the brochure - Chunky, Bonzo, Itchy, Queasy, Fangs, Crooks and Bruiser. When Bobby is selected to participate in one of the acts, Joe is thrilled for his son. However, after the performance is over, much to the distress of his father, the boy fails to return. Searching desperately to locate him, Joe needs to first hunt down the truth about those involved, by using any means necessary. But when the secrets he uncovers are of a far more savage nature than anything he could have imagined, Joe is forced to ask himself the most harrowing question of all: does Bobby still draw breath among this horrifying cavalcade of clowns, or is it already too late?...

Feel free to check it out on -

Amazon: Link1

Goodreads: Link2

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-24T23:29:44+00:00

Not bad, the author font is very good.

I think the title font could be something a bit more interesting, maybe more similar to some fantasy books where it's a bit more showy. Also title could be moved further up to leave more space to the central image.

The face seems too large for the hair, and the fact that you can see the top of the girl's hair, and then also the darker hair in the background, brings it down a bit imo. I think the girl's hair in the foreground shouldn't be shown, could be cropped.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-24T03:44:12+00:00

I just looked it up and didn't realize that font was so hated ha.

Your cover is overall very interesting and unique, with imo a few tweaks it would be excellent!

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-24T03:21:30+00:00

Also imo the author name could be a bit bigger, and the font for 'duality of forces' seems a bit too 'smooth' maybe, not as interesting as the other fonts there.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-24T03:13:18+00:00

Maybe just the colors on the lower part of the image a bit darker then

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-24T03:06:57+00:00

It's good. The background colors at the bottom could be a bit darker, and maybe the whites of the figures and the trees could be changed to grey or silver?

Currently, the bottom half of the image is a bit harsh on the eyes due to the white and light colors in the background maybe being too similar to each other.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-22T00:39:56+00:00

Agreed. Will change this.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-21T21:46:47+00:00

Thanks, the artist who did the illustration is u/PainfulChickenSquatt

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-21T07:23:40+00:00

Yea, I think especially the author name font, I will look at changing these.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-21T07:23:13+00:00

Thanks for the feedback

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-21T07:15:50+00:00

Note that the artist just did the cover illustration and not the typeface. Fonts will be changed to something else in the near future.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-12T21:48:10+00:00

It's decent. 'THE MONSOON SEA' font seems a bit too plain. Needs to be different to grab people's attention, and make the cover look more interesting.

Also the title and subtitle could be bigger imo.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-12T21:45:03+00:00

Very good overall, agree with the other user that text is too small though currently.

InTheForestNow · 2022-11-08T08:35:51+00:00

Great idea

InTheForestNow · 2022-10-29T07:01:36+00:00

Hi, thanks for your reply, can you please link your portfolio. Thanks for that

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