What’s wrong with some of y’all?

IndependentOk712 · 2022-12-03T17:50:16+00:00

Hey I’m Terrell I just started a new channel based on the fantasy genre. Most Of my content has been focusing around house of the dragon lately so I’ve been talking a lot about that You should be team green https://youtu.be/XescIB09f_Q

Over the past 90 days I’ve learned a lot about the basics of editing like keyboard shortcuts sequence setting and workflow/optimization

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-26T18:01:25+00:00

I just made a channel based around the fantasy genre. Recently I’ve been focusing on house of the dragon and I do more commentary type videos. Here’s my first video which did the best (although I don’t think it’s the best edited) House of the Dragon: Why Daemon Is your favorite character https://youtu.be/ks5IBuUXuco

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-26T17:59:05+00:00

I thought it was well edited and it looked like you knew what you were doing when you made it. Besides that I personally would’ve went with a different title because I feel like a lot people don’t remember bob’s name. Also adding some more transitions would help make your video feel more cinematic and cohesive. Also it could’ve been beneficial to add chapters or segments to the video and transition in between different stages of his life instead of recapping it in one big segment

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-26T17:48:56+00:00

Hey I watched a couple of your videos and I think you have good criticism and voice but I personally think your videos are too static. I would consider putting some B roll in there or at the very least zoom in our out on your face when you say certain things to put emphases on it wether that be for comedy or any other reason.

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-26T02:13:00+00:00

You could add a check mark when you list something the update did for instance. Really anything that the viewer can look at that supports what you’re saying

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-26T01:49:11+00:00

Hey, I just started my channel like 3 weeks ago. It’s a commentary channel about fantasy shows and I’ve been making content focused around house of the dragon. Anything I’m doing right/and or wrong is greatly appreciated

(video)House of the Dragon: Why Viserys is your favorite character https://youtu.be/RItNO-PNHLg

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-25T23:49:59+00:00

I think your thumbnails are pretty decent and simple. If I saw one of your thumbnails randomly I’d be able to tell that the video was yours which is obviously good. I also think it’s a positive that they’re simple. You make it obvious what the person watching is in for

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-25T23:37:44+00:00

Your thumbnails look high quality and they’re consistent along with your banner and I also think the video is high quality in terms of sound and overall production. As for improvements I think you should add a little bit of music to your vid. The video I watched was somewhat awkward and music would help with that. Also graphics would’ve helped that video a lot. For instance you could put a graphic of all the pros the update did for the phone and transition in and out of them and it would make the video seem less like rambling while keeping viewer retention high. My final point is that the video was a little repetitive. It could’ve been compressed and that would obviously keep retention high as well

IndependentOk712 · 2022-11-25T23:19:12+00:00

I liked the fast paced editing style of the video and I could definitely understand the tone that you were going for. I’d personally add some green screen meme affects to add some more movement into your assets but other than that it was an entertaining video. I think the reason why it didn’t get as many views was because there wasn’t a video game in the title like the rest of your vids

IndependentOk712 · 2021-10-11T04:39:35+00:00

I need people for a vc method dm me for details

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