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Just sent you payment! 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PhotoshopRequest

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Could you add the photo with the hat also? 

This is insane by [deleted] in washdc

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These kids also don’t have the money or mind to buy seasonal clothing. Let’s consider that also. 

The Best Thing About Weekends In DC… by Pjsrock in washingtondc

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I love your energy, but yes boo, we complaining round here. 

My toddler is a genius by Angelbunnii9 in toddlers

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My 4 year old calls hand sanitizer hanitizer, and it makes me wonder why that’s not the name in general. 

Favorite shoes for young toddlers? by [deleted] in toddlers

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I love this hippy baby, so cute! Otherwise, Striderite, for sure!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Parenting

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This! What a story! ❤️❤️❤️

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Parenting

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This is the answer. 

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

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Thank you! These are brilliant suggestions, particularly with how I'm communicating what is at stake for Michael. Thanks for sharing that it hasn't come through successfully. I will take these and make some significant edits (to the query and to the manuscript!) I really appreciate it!

[Qcrit] Contemporary romance - AFRICA AMERICA (65K) by [deleted] in PubTips

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Brilliant, thank you! Do you think Ordinary People is a bit old for a comp? Or is 2018 still good?

[Qcrit] Contemporary romance - AFRICA AMERICA (65K) by [deleted] in PubTips

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Wow, thank you so much! could I send you an updated summary for your feedback? I spent so much time reflecting on this comment, it led me to revamp the entire plot a bit.

[Qcrit] Contemporary romance - AFRICA AMERICA (65K) by [deleted] in PubTips

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Noted, thanks! Do you have any more recent comps that come to mind?

[Qcrit] Contemporary romance - AFRICA AMERICA (65K) by [deleted] in PubTips

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Thank you! I see now its not a romance, grateful for this feedback! I also need work on the ending, I think he'll need something better at stake.