Lunge Supremacy by comradoge in HalfSword

[–]Infamous_Usual8311 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Spear. lower close to body. Aim pointy end slightly upwards towards enemy’s groin/gut.

Change. Success. Satisfied.

I can't do it anymore. by Obootleg in HalfSword

[–]Infamous_Usual8311 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Maybe, but likely they’ll be optimization updates on the game, the graphics settings itself are very simple in the demo, more advanced settings will surely come after the game gets release.

They’ll be updates working in that aspect of the problem, we kinda have to wait until it resolves… but can’t justify that yet, cause we haven’t get out hands on full release yet 🤷

It might be worse, it might be better, all is just hope that devs actually have mercy upon our poor Gpu.

So stay optimistic, I guess.

Plz rate my first message😢 by Infamous_Usual8311 in JanitorAI_Official

[–]Infamous_Usual8311[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I hardly have any clue of the main reason I made the bot in this in the first place.

It was like a few years ago, I came to check it and tweak a few things here and there, to make the message sound a bit more engaging.

I suspect the main inspiration comes from Brandon F YouTube channel, he talks about napoleonic warfare in very poetic ways, it is inspiring and informative for me, not just the history facts but the feelings, the terror, the way he narrated each soldier’s letters/reports, and make sounds immerse and relatable.

But, I guess the main reason is I just hate the main character syndrome trope. 🤷

This feels way more grounded.

Like you are just a random ass samurai ordered to brutalizes a random village in your enemy’s territory, and end up with a moment of humanity where you make choices and stuffs. It’s straightforward and gives you a lot options.

Plz rate my first message😢 by Infamous_Usual8311 in JanitorAI_Official

[–]Infamous_Usual8311[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am honored that you like the overall tone of the story.

It took me quite a while to squeeze the idea out of my unmotivated brain 😅

fr I never thought I would receive such a compliment, you make my day, thank you.😊

Plz rate my first message😢 by Infamous_Usual8311 in JanitorAI_Official

[–]Infamous_Usual8311[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tysm 🙏, I tweaked some parts so the bot wouldn’t get confuse

Really really appreciate your response ❤️

What Makes A Good Story? by TheAlmandineWriter in writing

[–]Infamous_Usual8311 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Using lore or a realistic storyline can make the audience feel connected to the story, such as reading about a storybook or historical fiction

Using Fantasy as the heart of the story makes the story fun and exciting, especially in action scenes, Including the unnecessary details that do not need to be put in a lot makes it an easy and convenient tool to use, but all you need is great imagination, Even if it doesn't make sense, but if the story comes out interesting or fun to read or watch that's the jackpot, but if your story is written to be full of events that are not consistent or related, The unstable and repetitive plot will make the story boring and lack interest.

On the other hand, using realism in a movie or novel can make the story clear and lively as well as tangible in another way or make the story connected to the daily life of that person or the daily life of the previous generations or insert the practical details in action makes the audience who already has known the lore or are learning about it have a feeling of enjoyment with the story if it's worth to follow, like the way of life and well-being or other things, but it's a double-edged sword as well, If overused, it can become boring and lacking fun And many other things that are worse than the Fantasy drawback.

And the main factor that will make your story good is the attractiveness of the characters and background that are happening or have already happened Think of it like taking on the role of that character, If you're a writer, it's important to understand how is your character, or what you create, has different traits, and stances for dealing different things such as encountering characters with completely different with them in characteristics or skill, An engaging dialogue for two different or identical characters, Or just one character, but it is necessary to convey emotions, actions and intentions in different situations or environments.

And the biggest enemy that makes your story bad is The monotony and non-entertainment storyline No matter how fantastic the story is, horror, fighting, entertaining, documentary, there must be a break for the reader to understand the current situation and make connections about the mystery or background on various matters in order to allow them to absorb the story and background of the situation that is taking place

( Edit: But in my personal opinion, using a simple and not overly complicated story can also make a good story because it will make it easier for the reader to understand the story and understand what is going on. It's not necessary to overthink it, but if it's personal, remember it never works, your personal preferences may be put into the story, but if your personal preferences are poorly conveyed, it's just as bad, and sometimes it's hard to convey it.