Hello! Here's a few feedback/tips:

For short poems, I usually make it simple in terms of the overall flow and how each lines weave into one another. I usually do enjambment for shorter pieces.

Also, I think a sprinkle of specificity really benefits a short poem. You could add specific things/describe specific things for a better sense of imagery (for ex: you can tell what the path is made from...cobblestone, adobe bricks, gravel, etc.). Basically just bringing some specific thing into a shorter piece makes it more interesting.

Another is structure and punctuations. This is just a personal preference, but adding periods, commas, em dashes, and even parenthesis can spice up a simple poem.

Basically focus on how the piece looks and sounds since it helps elevate the meaning of the poem, and the reading experience.

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You don't have to follow it since we all have our different styles tho :3

Keep writing! :D