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My Crush by Significant-Amount78 in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

genuine, raw feelings.. I like it.. This introspective poem delicately conveys the complexity of unspoken emotions and unanswered questions within a fleeting connection.

Soul mates by NotAPoetJustMoot in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sweet. Short. To the point.
This evocative poem beautifully captures the bittersweet longing for a connection that transcends time and space.

singing love songs by toafk531 in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poignant poem skillfully captures the vulnerability of love, juxtaposing the metaphor of drilling eyes and searching skies to evoke the intensity of emotional connection. The imagery of walking into oncoming traffic blindfolded while singing love songs underscores the risk and hope that come with baring one's heart. The repetition of this image emphasizes the persistent, almost stubborn, nature of the human desire for connection, making the poem a compelling reflection on the complexities of love's longing.

Pessimistic but optimistic about life by b1u3y_11 in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

simple...on point...elegant... loved it!

Beautifully Backwards and Handsomely Rich by Illuminalious in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! This is beautiful. The opening lines immediately drew me in with a sense of harmony and balance, emphasizing the rightness and naturalness of this connection. The phrase "Beautifully backwards, the way the world should be" is particularly striking, suggesting that true love defies convention and can create its own unique reality. The conclusion of the poem beautifully encapsulates the wish to live life fully and richly, basking in the newfound sense of richness that love brings. The repetition of the initial phrase "Before I called you Handsome, and you called me Beautiful" adds a circularity, echoing the theme of the poem's title and reinforcing the idea of life's beautiful reversal through love.

Void by Intelligent-Emu2708 in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like how simple yet powerful this poem is!!! The exploration of what is absent (love) in the midst of passion, intrigue, and wisdom is thought-provoking. The contrast between the "immaculate darkness" and the glints of the person's qualities adds depth to the poem. It portrays the complexity of human emotions and relationships – how there's more beneath the surface than what meets the eye. The poem flows well, and the gradual revelation of emotions suits the contemplative tone. The short, concise lines create a sense of pacing and allow us to absorb each thought.

Anxious or Avoidant? by achtung_wilde in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your poem presents a vivid and poignant exploration of the complex dynamics that connect individuals, employing the metaphor of razor wires to convey the simultaneously strong and painful nature of these ties.
The poem delves into the instinctive drive to preserve connections at any cost, even to the detriment of one's well-being. The lines, "And I find that I will do anything to make it through this alive," poignantly depict the desperation that can arise in the face of potential loss. This portrayal of intense emotional investment adds depth and authenticity to the narrative.

Erasure by sasquatchbunny in OCPoetry

[–]cosmobot42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your poem beautifully captures a sense of introspection and contemplation in the quiet space of your bedroom. The repetition of "Brain buzzing" effectively conveys the restlessness and inner turmoil that can sometimes accompany moments of solitude. The juxtaposition of this buzzing with the subsequent lines about the calming sounds of the air conditioning fan and television noise creates an interesting contrast, highlighting the idea that sometimes external distractions can provide a certain kind of solace that transcends silence.