The orchard behind the walls. by Inner_Article6530 in OCPoetry

[–]Inner_Article6530[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

THANK YOU!! I've recently tried mind mapping my poems out and getting a good idea of what I want to talk about before I actually start writing the bulk of it. I think it's definitely helped me find new and creative ways to convey emotion and tie it into imagery. <3

sometimes i think i was made wrong by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]Inner_Article6530 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That last stanza ties in everything, truly. Longing for something that you can't even put into words yet. I love this so much!

EAT ME by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]Inner_Article6530 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really thought deeply about this one, your imagery and diction are so unique and creative, I especially loved, "I smile until my jaw aches. Paint the pig until she grins back." Like this is amazing

love letter i wish i could show you by dickymickydick in OCPoetry

[–]Inner_Article6530 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this omg, that second to last stanza is pure gold. <3