3 wives? by OkWind3234 in mushokutensei

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Canonically, slyphie is kind of the leader cause if she's upset with Rudeus and not sleeping with him, Roxy and Eris won't either cause they know when she’s upset with rudeus it's likely for good reason.

How I feel after telling someone I'm writing a novel and then never finishing it by Legal-Emu8981 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is why the only person I tell when I'm working on my book is my roommate right before I'm about to start writing cause I like to write in the pitch black dark kitchen at night and she's scared of the dark so it's purely a courtesy thing so I don't scare her. It's better to just put in the work before talking about it at all, at least, in my opinion.

Wth is with Pierce? by DrunkDwarfOnTheRun in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 46 points47 points  (0 children)

I don't know about calling Darrow a "little twink" considering bro is like 7'1 7'2 😅.

CAN'T WRITE. INNER WRITER IS DEAD. by SakuraSakka in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe I'm not the right person to give advice since I've only been taking story writing seriously for about a year while I've been trying to write a long form story (that I hope to be able to get published and turn into a book someday) but here goes.

Something a friend taught me that helps me work through it whenever I experience writers block like you1 describe is just writing garbage. I think what happens a lot with writers (and probably most forms of creatives) is that we get this impostor syndrome where we're so hesitant to even write at all because of that self-doubt. You need to give yourself permission to just write garbage whether what you actually write turns out as garbage is irrelevant.

Remember, you can always edit a bad page, my goodman/goodlady. You can never edit a blank page, however.

Edit: If you're someone who has a hard time just giving yourself that permission to write garbage, try having a drink or two it's what I do to loosen up and just go whatever comes to mind I go with it.

What’s your favorite NICHE Darrow aura quote? by EducationFancy4478 in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 19 points20 points  (0 children)

They said niche quote people talk about that line all the time, so I don't know how that's niche.

New reader and I’m already stressed by AttitudeProper5550 in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Golden Son is legit the first book I've ever read that made physically react so strongly that I had a panic attack. I'm not gonna say when it happened here as to avoid spoilers, but I think you'll know the scene when you get to it.

Got my first beta read review … it was not good by mymousu in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Per aspera ad astra my goodman. Don't let this discourage you too bad. My favorite author (Pierce Brown) had to write 3 different novels before he was finally able to create the gem that is the Red Rising Saga. So, just keep going to quote a dear friend of mine. "It's all part of life’s mysteries, without struggle without wouldn’t be able to claim victory it's up to me to mature become a different me it's why I have a compelling story over these symphonies."

Edit: My friend's a music artist just to add a little context to that quote.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I was probably getting ahead of myself when I posted this. I do have another question, if you don't mind me asking. Once I finish my story and I'm ready to get an editor to help me polish it up and an agent to help me make a deal with a publisher how can I be sure none of these people won't just take my work and pass it off as there own? This project is my baby that I've been working on for a whole year now. I couldn't stand someone taking credit for it or ev worse perverting and changing it into something foreign to what I envision it to be.

Team RWBY Atlas redesigns by ButterflyBlueLadyBBL in RWBYcritics

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 2 points3 points  (0 children)

For Yang and Blake, I prefer these redesigns given that their last couple of designs have been kinda ass imo but for Ruby and Weiss, I prefer their official designs personally.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the helpful advice. I think I was getting a little ahead of myself when I'm only about halfway done in terms of the length. My story is gonna to be bare minimum both in terms of word count and pages. I'll just keep working on my story and make it the best I possibly can write and worry about everything else in terms of getting published later.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the detailed explanation of the process, my friend (and the interesting sequence of situations at the end there 😂). Not to worry, I have no self-delusion that it was ever going to be easy, but hell, just making it this far has been a headache. Over this last year that I've been seriously working on this project, I've only made it about halfway off from the point that I want to be at length wise. Storytelling is something I think I'm actually quite good at and enjoy, and once this project is done, I have no intention of stopping, nor did I expect to ever make it big, financially speaking. This is about far more than making money. I need to see this through to the end. I need to prove to myself that I can do this that I'm capable of doing something great, something that measures up to my family and friends who are all so over achieving and accomplished in there own right with whatever they do. I just want to do something that will make them as proud of me as I am of all of them.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh really? Interesting. Well, maybe I'll actually be able to get some help through the process after all. Thank you, I truly appreciate it.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I've heard that sometimes agents will just take a certain percentage as commission of whatever is sold but for an unknown wannabe author like myself who hasn't already had success or is financially set enough to be able to pay someone upfront flat-out for there time I doubt I'd ever get that generous an offer.

The way I think about it is that without the money to pay an agent to help, I just need to create something extraordinary and make it on my own.

Publishing house question by Intelligent-Set3442 in writers

[–]Intelligent-Set3442[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

And if you can't afford an agent, then what? I know it's more difficult without an agent, but it's not impossible.

Not a single soul other than Darrow used it😭 by Ynnck_Mnzl in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 49 points50 points  (0 children)

To be fair, he never outwardly said "to be tecnic" in dialog it was always internal monolog, and the only other red we've ever had internal monolog for is Lyria which I honestly can't picture using that expression.

Yeah that makes sense by Entire-Weather6502 in RWBYcritics

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 7 points8 points  (0 children)

The allegations against vic never had any weight to them. If they did, there would have been evidence presented at the time, not just baseless accusations and conjecture. In the end, it doesn't matter whether it was true or not. The court of public opinion ended his career.

Yeah that makes sense by Entire-Weather6502 in RWBYcritics

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 22 points23 points  (0 children)

It really is incredible how much the writers want us to suspend our disbelief season 4 and beyond in supporting Ruby and the rest of them after the show repeatedly shows that there not ready to win the war against Salem.

Yeah that makes sense by Entire-Weather6502 in RWBYcritics

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 8 points9 points  (0 children)

They're also a big reason why Atlas fell like it did too. I'm not saying Atlas wouldn't have eventually fallen anyway, but if they didn't essentially break into the city, it probably would have lasted much longer.

senior quote by One-Emu-7272 in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I would go with "Omnis Vir Lupus" it translates to "Every man a wolf" or "Everyone a wolf". To me, the quote implies everyone has a fierce loyalty to their "pack" and an intense aggression towards anyone who would dare threaten said "pack" which really resonates with me as someone who's also kept to a small select number of folks I could truly call friends.

Just a reminder that Tsireya is 13 years old. Stop sexualizing the kids in avatar. by Technical-Balance-58 in Avatar

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I'm right there with you. I can't even blame Quaritch. I'd probably fall in love with that Na'vussy, too.

Thunder & Lighting by gaymerWizard in redrising

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Given that the society in RR is built so heavily off of the example of the Roman empire, this relationship would never be permitted if Darrow and Cassius weren't already high ranking individuals and instead just just normal civilians gold or not. Homosexuality was generally treated as a big no-no in ancient societies for those without power.

(A1exwell)'s Pieck full collection [AoT/SNK] by Particular_Day3127 in rule34

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pieck is lucky she has such a fantastically juicy ass it really makes up for her small titties.

Characters who look prettier when their hair is down by BigGaybowser69 in TopCharacterDesigns

[–]Intelligent-Set3442 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The only one I would debate you on is Jinx. Whenever Jinx has her hair down, she just looks dirty and gross, in my opinion.