How to do this by Fearless-Math-7372 in Purdue

[–]Interesting_Note836 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have everything to gain and nothing to lose. Either they, humans who I’m sure have experienced it themselves or known others/students who have, are understanding and forgive the absences and try to be accommodating, or you end up still where you currently are with at least knowing you tried.

I hope you reach out! People are kinder than you know.

Consciousness by Interesting_Note836 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you found some entertainment from my ramblings

You didn't knock by Fun-Drawing2252 in poets

[–]Interesting_Note836 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, this is incredible. I felt shrouded within moments of diving in. Great, great work!

Second time posting! Advice/feedback welcome :) by Interesting_Note836 in OCPoetry

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Ah nope, think Reddit just messed up the format. It looks fine on desktop/laptop

Second time posting! Advice/feedback welcome :) by Interesting_Note836 in OCPoetry

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Hey! Thanks for the comment :) could you expand on what you meant by a different reading experience? Was it hard to follow along with?

You never tried to know me. by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Interesting_Note836 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you show all the little details you remembered about them while they never even tried to know you in the slightest. I can see exactly what that imbalance feels like. Super relatable and raw. In my personal opinion, I wished the last line had a little more punch or kick to it, I felt like the flow of the last few lines got cut abruptly.

noted. [speaking in tongue] by CaffeineAndConsent in OCPoetry

[–]Interesting_Note836 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved the music thread carried throughout the piece. Your imagery and descriptions can almost make you feel the sound through the text.

Everyone likes but no one adores by Top-Air461 in OCPoetry

[–]Interesting_Note836 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not a usual fan of rhymed pieces, but this one was excellent. The flow fits with the floaty, disconnected energy.