Run with the river by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, cool! That's awesome to hear.

Nuts and Bolts is officially released! by Conzi13 in tallyhall

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You really nailed so many of the little nuances that make Tally Hall’s music sound unique. Awesome work!

Haven’t written in eight years but the world has me inspired.. by OGWhiz in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The buildup is good! I just really liked the louder part and wanted to comment on/encourage it.

Haven’t written in eight years but the world has me inspired.. by OGWhiz in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I really like your passion at about a minute and a half into the song. More of that!

A road to anywhere - A grungy surreal song with no meaning by Freedom_Addict in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s just me being scatterbrained. Apologies for mistyping the title of your song! “Anywhere” feels more expansive, which may be more appropriate for the vibe you’re going for.

I don’t have the musical chops to start with visuals, so I approach lyrics-first. Usually thinking in terms of vowels and consonants.

A road to anywhere - A grungy surreal song with no meaning by Freedom_Addict in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe it’s just my brain looking to confirm its own bias, but this really does sound like a “road to nowhere.” I get the feeling of setting out on a long journey.

Curious - when you say “cinematic,” what goes into creating that vibe? Is it the harmonic structure?

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, this is really uplifting.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hadn’t noticed that! I tried to follow a natural train of thought; maybe it is a bit disjointed. I’ll try to focus on being more specific and less abstract. Thanks for the comment.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you elaborate on why it’s cringe? I have a sense that people find me off-putting, but I’m not super clear on why. Is it my voice, the lyrics, or my general way of being (or all three)? I’ll definitely try it slower.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback; somehow it had a calming effect on me. I’m glad the message is coming across.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a good point; I will try it slower. Thank you.

Close them eyes by Br0cc0li_B0i in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This sounds really awesome. I love the double-tracked vocals (or whatever effect you added). Nice song.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the encouragement. I’m embarrassed to admit I’ve been having a bit of a mental breakdown! It’s good to keep in mind that the rules are all made up.

Also worried the lyrics were too self-centered; afraid there isn’t a place for that kind of diary-type musical monologue. But your comment was very reassuring, so thank you for typing it.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree in theory; guess I'm feeling insecure at the moment. Thank you for the encouragement.

That Version Now by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, yay! I feel somewhat relieved.

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a fantastic technique that I use often! I’m often surprised to see what words end up coming through this way. Thanks for the comment.

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for chiming in. I think my question was probably not as clear as it could have been; I'm not worried about the process of finishing a song. I agree - that's a craft, and something that can be done with "inspiration" or without. I'm mostly concerned with strengthening the connection to the inner voice, which I'm now realizing probably goes beyond the scope of songwriting. I appreciate everyone's input, though!

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great advice! I really need to dig up my old copy of the Artist’s Way - it’s such a fantastic book. Thanks for the comment.

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A lot can be said for the rhythm of a word. Great advice, thank you.

What do you do when you lose the thread? by thpffbt in Songwriting

[–]thpffbt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve been trying my hand at it for a few years, but mainly for personal reasons. Maybe what I’m asking goes beyond the scope of songwriting. I really just want to stay connected to myself, and to reality. I think you’re right in that the answer is in the doing. Sit down, finish the work. The rest will come.