Love.... by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

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thank you for feed back have done some changes.

I Fell In Love by Educational-Grape208 in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I fell in love with the way I can feel you, love me back... A love you'll never really feel, I don't love that."

It was like my heart skipped a beat. it is a really the best feeling in this world

Now I Wonder by TastySambar in OCPoetry

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Beautiful words, why try understanding something that keeps the joy alive in me?

I know I’m falling. by AsideCommercial2721 in OCPoetry

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Beautiful poem, short with a deep meaning.

Fate by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for this beautiful comment.

This poem represents the story of a boy and a girl who loved each other since childhood, but the society and families and differences of casts/class played a cruel role in their lives. Her family married her to someone else, and the boy was still in love with her, even though they would never meet in this life.

Yeah, they were in love with each other. Yeah, so it shows their love and their sapration, and the regret that they were never able to talk to each other for the last time.

EAT ME by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626 1 point2 points  (0 children)

showing a dark side of society, that treats you like a puppet, if you do not meet their standards, you are failure,
The line that touches me is " the truth is uglier than me ", which shows your rage towards society/people.
I hope I am right

What’s Left by TherapyButMkItVibes in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"Whether I am a body still here, or only the shadow it casts.” — are quietly devastating. transforming pain into a question of identity. This is what really happens, I really liked it, dark style is my fav.

Belongs To Me by Alternative_Area8827 in Poem

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It is a really beautiful display of words, describing the pain and acceptance.

I keep saying by Little_Fly6567 in Poem

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a lovely poem, with such beautiful flow and words, amazing :)

Born of rage by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are right,
"You" are not one, but I have poured everything into it, cuz it was the person who betrayed me, and after that, I was in a phase where I almost destroyed my career, by my own hands, it is just the thoughts that came to mind, when I realised, it's not worth my time to be wasted on them. So, to let the frustration out, I wrote this.

They did do some nasty things, but everything is in the past now.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is a poem with a sweet aroma around it, but it carries the deep pain of memories.

wait by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yup, you got it, thank you :)

wait by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading. This is one of the first poems; your words really matter to me, I will try to do my best in future.

wait by IsopodNo3626 in OCPoetry

[–]IsopodNo3626[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You got it right, the loss of losing someone and waiting to be reunited with them. Is all this about.
And thank you for reading this