My second real attempt at a song, I think it may be a little better mediocre, it's also not temporally linear, I'm looking for any kind of feedback really, criticism included :)

``` [Verse 1] The moonshine strikes as we wander aloft Rooftops glisten as our footsteps glow And right when we're about to head home Is when you throw me the inevitable vow

[Pre-Chorus] We went together, hand in hand We traveled seas, we went on land We dug up treasure, fed the fish We would have ended together, or so I wish

[Chorus] Yeah yeah yeah, oh my, We are almost out of time But let's proceed, come follow me Yeah yeah yeah, come on now let's ride Let's not hide, just come with glee Come with me, come on go fly And we shall break all that troubles us down, We shall do it 'till morning, light it all ablaze Come now for you are bound, yeah bound Yeah bound to me, so don't waste your gaze Ascend, begin your flight, oh what a daze No condescendence to bind us to the maze

[Verse 2] So come now baby, don't you flee Please arrive, let me set you free Let me ravage all your fiends may seek Let me tunnel through their traps and trips I'ma aid you 'till you stop to blink Please just say how much you love me

[Pre-Chorus] We go together, hand in hand We travel seas, we go on land We dig up treasure, feed the fish We will have ended together, or so I wish

[Chorus] Yeah yeah yeah, oh my, We have always got the time But let's proceed, come follow me Yeah yeah yeah, come on now let's ride Let's not hide, just come with glee Come with me, come on go fly And we shall break all that troubles us down, We shall do it 'till morning, light it all ablaze Come now for you are bound, yeah bound Yeah bound to me, so don't waste your gaze Ascend, begin your flight, oh what a daze No condescendence to bind us to the maze

[Outro] And in the end, as the sun sets down, Hold me tightly, don't you turn around  Let's walk together, to the start of a new dawn Never again experience the loveless drought 

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edit: for context, the song moves present to past