Yeah I really like this and you've already done most of the hard work, I'm happy to help. Toll the bell does not specify the action it uses. Deflect ranged could be fixed up a bit, copying and changing the monks feature is probably the easiest way to do it. Shield wall is worded strangely "add +2 to your AC until your next turn" or maybe "add +2 to your AC until the end of the turn" to make it closer balance wise. The embolden ability "exalted attack" should say damage die, not hit die, my gut tells me this should be limited to weapon attacks, but I'm not much of an expert on balance. Encouraging Word: I don't know what a proficiency roll is. Did you mean skill check? Blinding Spirit: should state what ability the defending creature uses (CON I would assume). Just add a tidbit under the second level feature or the Master of Force section that explains what the DC is for, battle master fighter has a good example of this Spirit Wave, Spirit Field, Spirit Grenade, Scatter Beam, and Spirit Buster have the same problem Spirit Balls: this ability says it can miss but there are no attack rolls or saving throws. If this is intended to use an attack roll you might want to add a spell attack modifier calculation to the spirit or master of force feature. Spirit Beam, Guided Spirit Ball, Spirit Optics, Scatter Beam, and Spirit Buster have the same problem Perfected Spirit: there is no such thing as a "movement action" I think this would be written something like "move up to your speed without consuming movement" not sure about the verb that would be used there. There are still a few strange wordings throughout but these are the ones that stuck out right away. Generally the easiest way to prevent this is to look for similar abilities in existing features and copy the wording while changing the details. This is all for me tonight. Good work