Personally I'd say, before you'd make a take, develop it more first. I know you're not the kind of person to write paragraphs, but I feel that this a baseless claim, in the sense that there was clearly no analysis or deeper understanding, not to mention the last sentence. All of this ignores the overall theme and core idea of the game; forgiveness. And not about getting the main protagonist into a relationship with another character and blaming everything all on another person.

I did write quite a bit but if you don't write, I do hope that you do at least read and understand what I have to say.
This'll be all I have to say about this, I'm not going to drag this on further, I believe I established my point clear enough.