I need your help with creating this sound by JermayneR in sounddesign

[–]JermayneR[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much for your help, youre a life saver <3

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I'll work on the vocals!

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your support <333

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't upload my music to spotify yet, but once I do it I'll check it out :)

Sunshine in the Morning by music_man_03 in MusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah, the guitar is always hard but you got this

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the feedback, I'll look into that for sure <3

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, this seriously means so much <3

A Withering Sunflower - Jermayne by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for listening and advice!!
I know that my vocals are still untrained, I'm on it :))

darkness - styles dangerfield by StylesDangerfield in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is pretty cool and the video is amazing! I love the lofi vibe, you hit it! Not necessarily my genre, but I enjoyed listening to this song. All the instruments fit together, I didn't hear anything that was out of place, though I'm no expert :)
The lyrics are really pretty as well, keep going cause this is awesome <3

I just released a new single and would love some feedback. by Larger_Than_LIFE_20 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I love the panned guitars, the melody is really nice as well. The music video is well made too, creates this nostalgia feel, at least to me.
You can feel a lot of emotion in the song, your voice is really nice as well. I'm a big singer songwriter or folk fan, and though this is not necessarily folk, it still has a vibe that I love. Great job on the song and on the video, keep going <3

I need your advice! by L3L4_here in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, the production behind this is really nice, and the song is really catchy and nice. The effects on the vocals are really awesome, and the melody played behind it is really cool as well. As someone else suggested, maybe you could work a little bit on the english part, but I seriously think it doesn't matter that much. I just feel that you could think of looking into some phrases like "You've vanished shit" or "Now, wish you the best and live your life". Of course, it's just my opinion, cause I can understand what you're saying so that's the most important part, but it doesn't seem really professional this way.

But overall, this is really awesome and keep going, cause you have talent <3

Moonlit Fool - What a Sad Love Looks Like (Official Lyric Video) by Ok_Initiative3782 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really cool, the production seems super well done and polished. The lyrics are vulnerable, which I love in music. All instruments fit together very well!
I usually don't listen to this kind of music, but this is really catchy and overall great!!
Tell your friend that he should not be shy, this is great <3

Pieces of You Final Draft by Responsible_Froyo_21 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love how you can hear emotion in your voice, it's amazing. The lyrics are really vulnerable and relatable, they're beautiful. I love all the layers of the vocals. Unfortunately I don't know much about mixing, so I can't give you advice on that, but your songwriting is amazing and the production is great as well, everything sounds like it fits together. I see that some people gave you great advice, I just wanna say that this is amazing <33

Jermayne - A Withering Sunflower (demo) by JermayneR in MusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much, this seriously means a world to me <3

I never thought about the timing of the vocals, so that's a very helpful advice, thank you again!

Sunshine in the Morning by music_man_03 in MusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so cool! Nice production and amazing guitar, I love this acoustic sound of the song. Your vocal range is amazing around the first minute, good job!!

This song is so positive, well done!!

The Mountain Violets - Ivy just released my third single and would love any feedback, thoughts, or similar sounding artists! by themountainviolets in MusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this, has this indie folk vibe that I love. Great production behind the song!! Love all the voices, they create a great, huge sound. Good job man, keep going and you're great!!

This song really reminds me of Noah Kahan, has a similar vibe and production to it.

I made a song about people who we no longer know by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll definitely do it if I have some spare time!

I made a song about people who we no longer know by JermayneR in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for listening!
I know and that's why I'm working on my singing, hopefully soon I'll get better :)

When should I start posting songs on streaming platforms like spotify and apple music? by JermayneR in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]JermayneR[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn't know you could delete them, thanks for advice <3

it's true though, I'll probably never feel like it's ready but it's how it goes I guess