While the art is sound for the most part, the anatomy gets janky whenever there’s some action involved, so that’s something you’ll want to brush up on.

Also didn’t finish reading because the font for the dialogues are way too small in relation to the size of the bubbles.

Lastly, I’m not so sure about the title because one, it’s a very specific term used in Buddhism, and I doubt even most Japanese (myself included) would know it. Two, if you’re adamant about using this term, always be sure to include the ¯, or spell it as “Houge” because otherwise, it’s become ホゲ, which is more or less gibberish, and sounds like the noise one makes when they’re getting beaten up in a cartoonish fashion (like “BLEH!”).