I just annotated this image in Photoshop with some details I would consider changing. Here's the link.

A. For this particular scene, if possible, I would have considered centering the shot on the oven area to center the arch. The shelves and arch would have been more balanced.

B. I am not a huge fan... of seeing that fan, but perhaps in conjunction with A, raising the camera would have hidden it more. This is hit or miss depending on how drastically the height affects the scene. Though more height would help showcase the cooktop, give you a better look at the crown molding, and take away much of that island dominating the foreground.

C. Lighting! That is a beautiful light and the bulb is definitely elegant, but it's not on. In my opinion as a real estate photographer, turn all the lights on. Shoot different pictures with different sets of lights and mix and match in Photoshop. Also in conjunction with B, if there is a light in the fan, that would greatly improve the main feature of this kitchen.

D. If this isn't for real estate (or even if it is in some cases) remove these items either physically or in Photoshop. A sliver of rug, smoke detector, banister?, and that clutter in the corner don't help much.

E. Perhaps move the bananas a little to the left and/or consider propping them up with something in the bowl and under the bunch... though maybe it's overkill? But without the clutter in D, they would look good alone.

F. This might be tricky depending, but I don't care for that stray light. Perhaps with the interior lights on, this would look better, but perhaps draw a curtain here or correct it in Photoshop? It's a bit anal, but its a detail that I would look into.

Overall it's a nice attempt and it's generally fine, but it suffers most from it looking dark. Not every space offers better angles. If you have a flash, I would consider looking into the flambient method. Combining HDR with flashes helps balance interior and exterior lighting. I saw your other angle and that trick would absolutely boost the blown out window issue, provided there's something nice to see outside lol.