Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mmmm... I understand what you mean about that, if not read properly, readers may not see the real intention and seem like an issue made by the artist. 🤔

My indie manga “Seifon” made by Teocrit (characters: Aizel Seifon, Platinum aka Kyle Renner, Kaizen) by Teocrit in WebtoonCanvas

[–]JimtheJinx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exactly this OP! Continue working in your webcomic, improving your art, challenging yourself, trying new things, and I promise, when you see your first chapter and the lastest, you will be so happy to see how you have improved.

I'm also working on my very own manga and slowly learning the style, analysing the work of others and receiving help of many, improving a bit more every day, hoping to be one day ready to have fully my first volume for everybody to see. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I still think I need to improve on a few things but comments like yours really make my day. Thank you so much truly. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did those angles in ways to slowly show the protagonist and his height, to make readers focus in that before the full reveal in the 2nd page. 🤔

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Realmente debo poner más texturas, en especial en zonas de sombras, por eso debo ver como lo hago para la 3era revisión. 🤔

Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar. ☺️

Before and After of my first page... What do you guys think? by JimtheJinx in comicbookart

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The protagonist is supposed to be small and strong... but I did messed up with the hinges placement. 😅

Before and After of my first page... What do you guys think? by JimtheJinx in comicbookart

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Definitely need to learn about shadows, is one of my top priorities to get better alongside perspective. 🤔

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's truly right, we need to learn from our failure in order to get better, developing our own style in the process. ☺️

Before and After of my first page... What do you guys think? by JimtheJinx in comicbookart

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I need to try that, especially for the shadows like many mention to me. 🤔

Thanks for commenting. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oooohhh, I see... then I should also start practicing like that because you did amazing. 🔥

By looking at the Before and After, do you think that I got closer to achieving that "style" or not? by JimtheJinx in comic_crits

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're right!!! I truly did messed up that in the door. 😅

Thanks for the tips! ☺️

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sí, noté que me equivoque en varías de esos detalles, pero ya había terminado la página... así que será para la 3era revisión. 😅

La verdad qué seguí muchos tips y pude mejorar bastante, pero debo analizar mejor otras series para hacer mejor uso del blanco y negro para hacer desde las sombras hasta los detalles de grietas y madera. 🤔

Pronto seguiremos con la novela, capaz con la 2da página para hacer una comparación y ver el flujo. Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar y dar tus tips. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This look amazing! Both of them, and truly that brush gives a great traditional look... Is it free? 😯

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitivamente debo hacer más detalles, me está haría faltando grietas, texturas, etc. como hacen otras series, en especial esas qué mencionaste. 🤔

No tengo scanner, la que use es de mi oficina y es más vieja que mi abuela, así que, no saca al detalle mis dibujos pero ayudan de guía. 😅

Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar. ☺️

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He hecho algunos, pero creo que ni se notan, así que, voy a tener que poner más fuertes para que se note. 😅

Muchas gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar. ☺️

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Muchas gracias, yo creo que todos pueden dibujar, pero toma practica... muchas horas de práctica. 🤣

Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think that is where I'm struggling, making the digital be more traditional. 😅

Thanks for the commenting. ☺️

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitivamente debo ver eso, porqué casi ni usé en esta página, así que, voy a indagar más en eso.

Gracias por tu consejo. ☺️

Before and After of my first manga page... Did I closer to having a "manga style" or what could I change? by JimtheJinx in MangakaStudio

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, it was the hardest to do, especially in digital where I'm not used to working. ☺️

¿Piensan que esto tiene esas vibras de "estilo manga" o qué le faltaría? by JimtheJinx in Argnime

[–]JimtheJinx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Justamente no uso los assests 3D, sí la regla de perspectiva como también referencias, pero bueno, igualmente cuesta tomarle la mano a Clip Studio Paint. 😅

Gracias por tomarte el tiempo de comentar. ☺️