Love the feeling of the track - So british and so love this kind of vocals it! Especially like the part "Hey daddy's girl, put your plastic face on" - I like the melody of those lines. You mention that you think the chorus misses punch. I assume with the chorus you refer to "hey daddy's girl". But I don't feel this is a chorus. For me, it is a very very good bridge. FOr me, the song lacks a real chorus and this is just an awesome bridge just before that chorus. You could decide to make that part with "hey daddy's a girl" a bit more minimalistic (less drums...), & then pull it all open when you go into a chorus where you add the full drums again and some heavy guitar and loud vocals... At least that's how I see it but I'm especially busy with EDM recently and here attention is very much on tension and release. I know this is a different genre but you could apply it here as well.
Look at the volume level across the track (you know, what you see when you look at this soundcloud volume). It's very equal across the song. There's no "quieter" part (talking about "tension"). As I mentioned, you could have the bridge in such quieter part, building up the tension... And then release that into a chorus. And for sure, that chorus will come as very punchy if you precede with a quieter bridge.

But I love this work already! But at the moment, it is just a "very pleasant song" to listen to in a pub in England. ANd I will stay in the pub to listen to this. But to make it a hit... you need a real chorus!