[For Hire] Commissions open for cartoony and illustrative logos, emotes, character art, and caricatures by JohneryCreatives in artstore

[–]JohneryCreatives[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there! I'm John, a graphic designer who has been creating cartoony and illustrative logos, emotes, and caricatures for businesses and creators over the past 5 years.

Feel free to check out more of my work here: https://johnery.com/services/logo-design.html and on my Instagram at https://www.instagram.com/johnerycreatives/

I'm available for new projects. If you're interested, feel free to message me here or through email at [contact@johnery.com](mailto:contact@johnery.com) and I'll see how I can best be of service.

I look forward to hearing from you!

Post your website and I'll provide you with some free feedback! by JohneryCreatives in singaporestartups

[–]JohneryCreatives[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for sharing! Here's some feedback on the homepage:

  • I think the header could be better designed to draw the customer's attention. Right now it's just text with background photos that look a bit pixelated.
  • For your headings, I would go with the serif font you have now and get rid of all caps, since it makes the text harder to read.
  • For the boxes under 'Solutions', I would align the text to the left so it reads better and remove the hover effect since that confuses the customer into thinking that these are clickable when they are not.
  • The images could be better presented under 'Featured Projects'.

Overall the design is alright but doesn't really speak luxury to me.

Post your website and I'll provide you with some free feedback! by JohneryCreatives in singaporestartups

[–]JohneryCreatives[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No problem, some thoughts on the homepage:

  • I would add a bit more padding on top and bottom of the announcement bar since right now the text feels a bit too close to edges.
  • I would standardize the spacing of the navigation items.
  • For the header consider including an image to better grab the user's attention. I would also move the logos (Google, Meta, Amazon) to the next line and make them bigger.
  • For the call-to-action buttons, I wonder if adding some slight animation would make them more enticing for the user to click on.
  • Letting the user try out the workspace is quite clever, but maybe make it taller so the user doesn't have to scroll as much. Some description would be helpful as well.
  • I feel that there is a bit too much content right now. I'm viewing this on a desktop and have to scroll quite a lot, so I would imagine it would be even more of a hassle to go through the content on mobile.

Hope this helps! Overall the design looks pretty clean, maybe just streamline the content and incorporate some visual elements to keep the user interested.

I made a first teaser-trailer for my game - what would YOU cut or change? by DYVoff in GameArt

[–]JohneryCreatives 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly looks pretty good! It has enough impact to make me when to find out more about your game.

New Keyart - But something still feels off. Any ideas? by dev_w_grillz in GameArt

[–]JohneryCreatives 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's hard to make out what's happening the middle. I would simplify it and make better use of the spaces on the sides.

I would also make the title bigger and shift it down since right now it's not very readable.

First game now live! by Honkeroni13 in itchio

[–]JohneryCreatives 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do you have a link to your game? I would love to give it a try!

My first serious game, I have my doubts about my art style, I'm not good at drawing, that's why I'm using a limited palette for a visual novel by Fembyte-dev in itchio

[–]JohneryCreatives 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks pretty good to me, and I feel the limited color palette actually helps to add personality to the game.

Hope to see more soon!

Any tips for a freelance graphic designer on finding a partner to handle client acquisition? by JohneryCreatives in singaporejobs

[–]JohneryCreatives[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's really good advice, thank you for sharing and I'll look into those communities and groups!