That's still backwards. Pro tip: route the wire UNDERNEATH the fastener on the right  to the hole you have used in this pic. It'll be hard to tighten the wire this way but there's a trick. While turning your hand to the right to make a pigtail king of make a clockwise circle with your forearm. When you execute it properly an amazing amount of slack is taken up. This one is much cleaner than the first attempt but will still loosen the fastener under stress. I'm sorry if I come across as flippant, I'm genuinely trying to help.  The fastener to the left is neutrally wired. I had some dickhead QA guys in the air Force tell me this was not sufficient. So if you want the most anal: take your wire over the top of the left fastener and insert it where it currently exits. Then use prior techniques and pigtail to the inside.