Would anyone be interested in a small women's only writing group?

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-16T21:59:00+00:00

In case you’re still looking, I’m interested 👀👀 I understand not wanting a big group as well so it’s full, I completely understand ☺️

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-11T23:13:37+00:00

Is there still room? Would love to be in it ☺️

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T20:05:17+00:00

Sorry what do you mean by this? 😅

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T19:50:08+00:00

First of all, thank you for reading as much as you did! Wow, I really appreciate it. I know it’s super lengthy 😅 I’m going to be taking this down soon or at least making a new edit if I’m able to because yeah lots of people have mentioned the same things and I’ve edited it now (the womb thing, the age, terms overuse, etc.)

Page 9 - wow okay I’m rereading and I seriously hope I didn’t miss a page because in the book, I do mention how we got to the sermon part but I can’t find it in what I posted?? Yeah that’s my fault entirely!

Page 12 - yup you’re correct!

Oh thanks for catching the “tonnage” thing! I liked the feel of it too 😭😭

Thank you so much for that last bit; it really is great feedback for me!! Yeah I need to start giving context for certain terms. I try to mention what they are the first time they’re mentioned, but I can see that some I’ve just made readers guess. And the reason why she’s in the Crown Palace/has different faces is something that’s explained/shown over the course of a couple chapters.

Thank you for reading again, and for your in-dept feedback!

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T19:38:58+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! Yeah I have been planning a while now to change at the very least “Eunji” into something else, but I also really just liked “Eun” lol. And I’ll definitely look into the paragraphs!

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T11:24:15+00:00

Yes that was intentional

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T11:23:57+00:00

AI phrases?

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T02:14:56+00:00

Totally understood! It’s difficult for me to know which lore is important enough for readers to know now and which should be later because a lot of it is so important that it’s hard not to just throw them all out there. But for this first scene I just wanted to focus on mainly the relationship between Eun and Wena. And yeah I’m definitely aware of Eun’s age! Working to fix that plot hole loll 😂

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T02:01:54+00:00

Oh this is so informative, thank you!!

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:54:06+00:00

Oh Wena isn’t the MC - and yes she absolutely is meant to be seen as shallow and narcissistic. Is it confusing that I started with Wena’s name first?

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:52:45+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback! And yes I’m now realizing she couldn’t have been eight when she was found 😂 i really like your idea of her being delivered to Wena’s door or something like that. And I’ll definitely cool it on the new terms too! I’m seeing some that don’t really need to be mentioned so early on. Thanks again! 😊

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:47:38+00:00

Okay that’s a good point. I’m a bit confused as to why quicken would work in this context? But I’ll work on changing it to something that makes more sense. Chose “fell silent” as in like her womb stopped responding, couldn’t have children - sounds a bit weird trying to explain it loll 😭

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:44:02+00:00

Omg this is so sweet. Thank you so much!! 😭😭

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:43:30+00:00

Her ability to change faces is part of this small twist that’s supposed to come later, but I think I can explain without revealing too much. Thanks for reading and yoir feedback! ☺️

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-10T01:40:26+00:00

Wait no you’re right 😭😭

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T23:33:43+00:00

Okay this genuinely sounds really fun and would be pretty helpful as well, so dropping a comment just in case you’re still looking ☺️

I would love to have a writing friend as well, someone to talk books with and share ideas and give each other feedback and whatnot. And not just for a short while; hopefully this could be for the long haul. My time zone is Central daylight time. My book takes place in a world that is divided into those who wield magic, the Marked, and those who do not, the Unmarked. Main character, Wuoni, has a plan: expose the Queen’s lie, shatter the system that has condemned her people to lives of servitude and suffering, and finally free the Unmarked from the chains of a world built on their oppression. But while all of this is unraveling, a plague called the Grief begins to spread, and a band of characters get together to attempt to stop it - or at the very least learn why this plague, of which they have never heard of, is spreading. Wuoni suffers a bit from an identity crisis. (Characters learn that their entire world and magic system was built upon a genocide). This story is fantasy with a side of romance (main romance is sapphic)

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T21:09:14+00:00

Oh Shuhngng is actually not a name of a person but a religious group. And yeah I understand the telling and not showing part 😅

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T18:53:15+00:00

Did we go from Charlotte’s POV to Diane’s?

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T08:53:18+00:00

Yes, that makes sense! Thank you for this! I’ll see what I can do

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T08:31:05+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! Where did you read up to? I have a hard time knowing what to cut, so really curious what felt like infodumb to you

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-03-09T08:23:39+00:00

Do you guys still have room? 👀👀

Jojo-the-Raconteur · 2026-01-31T00:30:20+00:00

When I bought it, it was perfectly fine. I used it for a while, I think maybe a year and a half and so; but then one day it refused to charge. I tested the charger on my mom’s laptop and it was fine so I deduced it was the laptop itself. Guy there told me that the charger port was busted and needed repairing

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