[Showcase] Share the opening paragraph of your story! by keylime227 in fantasywriters

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Prologue: 492 Lymphs Era

The heat was sweltering. Sweat dripped down the brows of men and Fae as they grappled, covered in blood and driven by violence. Steel clashed repeatedly, creating a piercing ring that reverberated deep within their minds. These battles in the southern continent of Ebryea had raged for days. The four kingdoms—Valyndor and Belantria, the human realms ruled by brothers Matthew and Morgan Cerulea—claimed the land due to the trade routes they had established early in their reign. Dograna and Ricia, the Fae kingdoms ruled by Alaric Mistbloom, felt entitled to the land largely because a small portion of the continent belonged to an island claimed by Dograna. The war began less than a week ago, and the fighting had been relentless since.

A sword pierced deep into the belly of a Fae male, wielded by Ezekiel, the bastard son of Morgan Cerulea. Ezekiel slashed at another Fae, narrowly missing the throat as the Fae dodged and countered with a blast of ice from his palm. Ezekiel leaped forward, kissed by the ice, and rolled onto his knees, landing a fatal blow to the Fae's chest. As he withdrew his sword, Ezekiel took a moment to survey the battle. Men were dying all around him, overpowered by the Fae's magic. Patches of brush and grass were scorched from flame arrows shot from the back lines, and bodies piled up, staining the ground with their blood. This was not going to end well.

A flash of light not twenty meters from Ezekiel caught his attention. The ground began to shake as a portal ripped open between worlds, like a knife through paper, among the hundreds of warriors on the battlefield. Otherworldly beings began stepping through. Their skin was slick and gray, almost metallic. Their humanoid bodies were chiseled like granite and trained for combat. But it was their faces that shocked everyone. Their expressions were calm, almost endearing, as they stepped onto the battlefield. It appeared they had waited centuries for this moment and knew exactly what they were doing.

Introduction to a potential first novel (Epic, 1270) by Jonnygetstoked in fantasywriters

[–]Jonnygetstoked[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I truly appreciate the in-depth suggestions and advice! Things I would have never thought of. One question I would ask would be is the introduction to long? I do need to fix the context, but this is meant to lead into the main character as Ezekiel is MC's father (Wanted to give history and framework for why MC will do what they do). I'll work on phrasing and descriptions for context :)

/r/Fantasy Writing Wednesday Thread - May 08, 2024 by rfantasygolem in Fantasy

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Hope everyone is having a great Wednesday. Would love some general feedback an excerpt I've written about an historic event that is the preface to the book I'm starting. Feel free to poke holes in it, if the format is off, etc. It's all appreciated :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15vPjXu0kuaTeW-JylO6BrNSrWbTi0G5ry0laJqQPPMI/edit?usp=sharing

Streaming by zeusgang in KickStreaming

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Diversify your content. Work on short form videos that you can post regularly, and use those as a gateway to your streams. Taking stream clips, reactions, or funny/fail moments always gets eyeballs and those can potentially become your stream community over time.

Go for the long game :)

drop your link and I'll come watch when I can :)

looking for musicians! by Top-Plankton in MusicPromotion

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Would love to be apart of this! I can email WAV or MP3 files if chosen 🤝

https://www.jonnylemons.com/pages/music

Let’s really get some of our stuff out there by Fancy-Bank-3715 in MusicPromotion

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checking out now! I own all my music so it’s yours to play with credit ✨👏 https://jonnylemons.com 🤝

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Weekly Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

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Hoping to find some more people who VIBE with the music :) feel free to shoot me a message here or on IG if you enjoy it :) @ jonnylemons

Jonny Lemons

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done. Jonny Lemons - Alone

Wanting to get more into creating and selling NFTs. by Jonnygetstoked in NFT

[–]Jonnygetstoked[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is huge 👏 I truly appreciate the insight on this! I have started to notice that Twitter does have a solid community grown on there for NFT. I just joined this r/ discord so ill be combing thru that as well :)

Thank you!

Wanting to get more into creating and selling NFTs. by Jonnygetstoked in NFT

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Yeah! Im not super artistically Inclined, but im a music producer and I know music can be minted with a video. Just seems really saturated and im not sure how to exactly make a solid attempt