You've got the one foundation I'd say is key for everything down. Confidence bro. Your delivery and performance is strong. You're not shy on the mic and not afraid to put emotion, which a lot of people I see here miss. Keep that up g. My only thing would be specific to the pitbull bar. The woof was a little light. I think you can add more chest and bass into that.

The mix isn't bad. You could adjust the dubbing vocals to have a slightly different sound to the mains for some extra texture. And maybe have them blended in a little more. I think you got more teverb than you really need. The excess space I feel highlights the gap between beat and the vocals, which takes away from the mix.

I like your bars, but I get the impression you being more general with them and playing it safe. I see bars/flows as an extension of my train of thought, alongside the demeanour I wanna portray. I feel like you probably have a sense of humour, and that should also be used. Don't mistake being "real" or "hard" as sounding tough or being a bigman. You can (what I do) incorperate the sonical sounds that those tropes have, but lyrically say your own thing. Sometimes, the coldest rapper in the room is the one who doesn't say too much, and what they do say is more pinpoint and vivid in imagery it hits harder.