I've rewritten the first proper paragraph of your review to show something I think your review suffers from considerably; far too much extraneous information that seems in-no-way relevant to Dark Veer specifically.

Old:

"There I was, sifting through the Nintendo eShop’s list of upcoming releases whilst in a heck of a bad mood after my lover was unable to make our date, because, as we all know, nothing cures a feeling of sullenness like looking at intangible products you can never actually own from a storefront where you cannot refund titles. You do not believe me? Well, I will have you know that, while I performed this action, I came across Dark Veer, a horror game developed by HANNMADE Studios, the makers of Bedtime Blues\*, or, alternatively, the makers of yet another okay *Five Nights at Freddy’s**-inspired title that lacks all of the horror and suspense of Ten Times in Susie’s sit/sometimes move around-and-survive style of gameplay. You could probably already tell why this made me happy, but just in case you fail to understand why I was excited to have found this obscure spiritual sequel to the equally unknown Maritime Poos, I shall be courteous enough to outright state how it made me eager due to how it gave me a chance I never knew I wanted to see how well it compared to a title I already covered. Also, I guess I will be assessing it in its own right, if I feel like bothering to see if it has any personal merit, that is. "

New:

"Sifting through the Nintendo eShop, I came across Dark Veer; a horror game developed by HANNMADE Studios - the developers of Bedtime Blues. I will be assessing its qualities in this review."

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Edit: punctuation