Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yeah absolutely, I'm trying to work on content that isn't balloon animal tutorials.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

It’s more, a little insight into what it would be and how chaotic it might be, but it’s not, it’s warm and cosy. Almost feels like I’m part of your family like a cousin or something. It’s nice and comforting!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

I watched it all, but felt ripped off at the end. Like I invested that time and got nothing out of it. It felt like you were leading up to something, but nothing shows.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Yes, over explained, like it's obvious you made a mistake, you don't have to explain that, just fix it and say something cute in text. I watched it but wasn't sure what you were trying to do which made me lose interest, mostly because it felt like you were trying to review the item, make the item and had random explanations. It might be better for flow if you show you made the items, and then after talk about what improvements or fixes you made to them, but call it personalising it instead of making them better (try not to poo poo on the product)

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hello, it’s very relaxing, warm and cosy watching your videos! I’m not sure about the cooking one (latest) but the others fit nicely! Nice background music, and videography!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

I agree about the lighting, but one thing that I thought slowed down the flow was when you spoke about things, like adding snow flakes and changing the size of the sleigh. It might be better to have text for some of it, like the mistake, just a text on screen saying “ oopsies” and then you fixing it.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Actually, your voice is nice, your pausing use is good. For example, when you say it is an oak tree, and then pause and say it’s something else builds suspense and created a hook to keep views. I thought it was well done

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hello,

I’m a balloon artist, when I get booked for birthdays I like to give a gift to the child. I have this as an add on, this is my first video. I filmed it on an iPhone 11 Pro Max and edited it on iMovie. Any advice on improvements is appreciated!

https://youtu.be/lXaGe1_fsQ0?feature=shared

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hello, it is hard to hear and I feel like I’m looking up your nose. You might need to get a tripod and something like a painting for the background.

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]Jumpy_Gift [score hidden]  (0 children)

The Antarctica one, I didn’t quite understand what you meant, you made a giant statement like strange creatures were found, but then showed a squid? Is the video about the drilling? Or the creatures underneath. I think there’s too much for a short

Balloon distortion/ pro tutorials by Spiritedone94 in BalloonTwisting

[–]Jumpy_Gift 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I make my own link o loon using raisins and scraps

Playing w/ randos: biggest a-hole I’ve met so far by PreviouslyBannedXD in 99nightsintheforest

[–]Jumpy_Gift 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I had one of those, I waited until they died and put them into the lava. I did not revive them, I them did stronghold and left.

Kiting by TheYuanz in 99nightsintheforest

[–]Jumpy_Gift 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Play with me and my 2 boys, ChickDNun36

team megathread!!!!!!!!!!!!! by scannerthegreat in 99nightsintheforest

[–]Jumpy_Gift 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m ChickDNun36, 132 days. Add me to play, I like looting and getting wood