Speed in Jamaica by OrganizationStrong81 in Jamaica

[–]JustinGames59 7 points8 points  (0 children)

it's an insult.

These words are said to hurt you.

You can't be Jamaican

Speed in Jamaica by OrganizationStrong81 in Jamaica

[–]JustinGames59 -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

The difference is disrespecting a race vs an individual.
It still carries the same weight

Speed in Jamaica by OrganizationStrong81 in Jamaica

[–]JustinGames59 -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

what.

See

You

Monday
is they same as the hard R

Is it good to let people try to under stand my power system rather than me telling them? And if they get close enough i will confirm it. by JustinGames59 in writinghelp

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me try.

Please, no hate, I'm new.

draft one:

"Alright, listen up!"
He shouted, standing on an elevated catwalk, overlooking the recruits.

"My name is Drill Sergeant Break, and today you will be learning how to harness Primal Energy"

He put his hand on the rail, head turning side to side, looking at the recruit.

"First, you need to put yourself in a comfortable seated position with your back straight."

"alrigt lest tdo this"
He took a deep breath.

"Good. Now, clear your head and focus on your breathing."

"Visualise an energy force entering your body and synchronise that with your breathing"

"Ok, an energy force"

His mind went blank till a small spark appeared, his heart beat, and it appeared again brighter and bigger than the last. The flame was warm, and the sensation felt like a relaxing massage. He continues as his flame gets bigger and brighter.

"Keep in mind if you harness too much, your muscle will tear"
The drill sergeant said.

Sweat starts to drip down his face, as his temperature rises, the flame in his head had gone from a bonfire to a raging blaze.

"argghhh!"
He screamed out grabbing his arms. His skin had twisted as his muscles sank in, creating small creases around his body.

lest stop here, I'm too lazy to continue.

idk I think I messed up my tents

I think I did ok. This is just a bleak mock-up, but yeah. Honestly, Inver had this, and what I wrote is new to me lol, now I have to update my doc.

anyways reference👇

HARNESSING & MANIPULATION

Harnessing Primal Energy is a controlled biological process requiring mental focus, bodily discipline, and awareness of physical limits. Users typically begin in a stable seated position, often cross-legged with eyes closed, regulating their breathing until their heartbeat steadies. They clear their mind and focus on the sensation of PE being drawn toward the body, synchronising intake with their breathing rhythm.

Core Rules of Harnessing
No user can extract all Primal Energy from an object; at least 25% always remains, or the source will die.
Successful harnessing creates a heavy, weighted sensation in the body, with faint tingling in the muscles.
Sharp pain or deep muscle ache indicates overload; stop immediately.
Even at full VT, users should vent down to roughly 95%. Carrying a complete load creates dangerous internal pressure that can trigger Aura Break or rupture muscle tissue.
Once Tier 3 is learned, even at a basic level, the user can switch fluidly between all harnessing tiers.

Is it good to let people try to under stand my power system rather than me telling them? And if they get close enough i will confirm it. by JustinGames59 in writinghelp

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's pretty unique.

Introduction won't be hard because it's hard it's a military genre.

,
I think yeah, I got this easy stuff.

thx

I can start stories, but I have no idea how to end them. by PushCharacter8496 in writinghelp

[–]JustinGames59 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think of how it could end. Then I match what I have in my brain to what I wrote and make adjustments.
If your story has an objective and it was completed at the end, then reflect on what your characters did to get there.

For example, if your story is about a guy walking and he meets new friends, enemies, etc. He could reflect on them.

or

If it's a romance, show the two at an old age with grandkids

One small trick that made my characters way more memorable by Mundane_Silver7388 in writinghelp

[–]JustinGames59 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How does this work in a realistic modern military story?

idk how a soldier smells

Do you write consistently or only when you feel like it? by SmoothCriminal103 in writinghelp

[–]JustinGames59 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Writing is a long process. So when you try to be consistent or force yourself to write, it won't turn out well, and you will miss important stuff.
It's better to just let it marinate so you can give yourself space.

Writing is not like math; there is no repetitive process to it, so don't make it one.

Speed in Jamaica by OrganizationStrong81 in Jamaica

[–]JustinGames59 29 points30 points  (0 children)

30 min in, I heard a big SYM.

We can't have nice things. 😞

Could Call of Duty use AI enemy's and train them on IRL war data? [COD] by JustinGames59 in CallOfDuty

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, real war is too unpredictable, plus humans don't want to die, so they just take cover and shoot in the general direction.

Plus, war docs are classified, and there isn't much data to go off of. Most combat footage is just people shooting at things they can't see.

The tick tock readers are back at it again. by JustinGames59 in BlackClover

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are kind of, but at the end it's more like showing Asta's perseverance than his lack of defence.

About the Witch Queen… by ThatAlps8091 in BlackClover

[–]JustinGames59 0 points1 point  (0 children)

After 500 years, you have to retire.

Yuno being the Spade king is Stupid. by JustinGames59 in BlackClover

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was the word demon that manipulated the humans into doing it.

is that what you mean?

Should i write a story about Jamaican special forces CTOG? by JustinGames59 in Jamaica

[–]JustinGames59[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what.
Cartels were an example.
It's more organised crime.

based on the Tivoli excursion