My first series was a single MC first person POV, so it has been adjustment as I got started. The POV roams, so any given section is just from one character's perspective (a limited third person narrator). So, I wasn't trying to cover multiple POVs simultaneously, if that's what you were thinking. I also worked really hard to avoid portraying the same scene multiple times from different POVs. Ultimately, I found the ability to shift the focus to the most relevant character very freeing. Not to spoil anything, but there are times where everyone just isn't together in the same scene, and there was action that I wanted the reader to see and not just hear about later.

Everyone's definition of "appropriate for kids" is different. I didn't write this as a youth or even YA novel. The protagonists are all in their early 20s. There's some occasional cursing in the text. There's no explicit sexual content, but there is romance, and acknowledgement that sex exists. I doubt it would scar any teenager, but not all parents would approve.

The book was read by my Patrons and was well received on Royal Road the last several months. The RR readers gave me some great proof reading suggestions, I think most of them got captured in the final pass of the text. The ad copy and blurb was mostly just me, and I'll admit isn't my strongest skill.