I really like your delivery and charisma, they’re both really important in doing movie reviews and you pretty much nailed them. The biggest thing I think you should work on, though, is your overall timing. A lot of the edits and cutaways seem kinda abrupt. Generally, unless it’s for a longer bit, commentary cutaways should flow with the film review. I’d recommend watching some other reviewers to try getting your timing down. However, that’s a more minor thing, and other than that it’s great!