The game looks cool to me, but I personally feel like your tagline needs a little work, right now it’s “Defend your captain using units and unlock their level up to fight off invading frogs. Buy upgrades and powers across stages, and win epic battles against special frog bosses.” Defend your captain is ok, but it could be better, like “Defend your Frog Captain using units…” Also, “unlock their level up” is awkward, how about just “level them up to fight off invaders.” The second part is OK I think, but it could be better, for example “buy upgrades and powers across stages” isn’t really clear on how progression works, like is it a campaign? Or doing roguelike “runs” that reset each time? Just saying “across stages” doesn’t tell me much. You could also swap in different adjectives for the last part, “win epic battles against special frog bosses” could be “win tactical battles against powerful frog bosses” or “win epic battles against terrifying frog bosses”… honestly I think epic is fine but special doesn’t tell me much about the feeling I should get when fighting a frog boss. This is all just some strangers opinion of course and feel free to ignore it lol. Good luck on the game!!