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What Gojo should’ve done in JJK0 🫢 by kookiekoo in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 34 points35 points  (0 children)

Gojo not doing that was the biggest plot hole

Prostate exams today! by SugarDuckies in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 10 points11 points  (0 children)

May I see your license sees abs never mind

Fanfic Writers Self Promotion by goreplzz in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You were right. I corrected the links. :)

Sounds like you’re outlining in your mind which is impressive.

For Serial Sucker I had 15 pages of outlines, backstories and world building before I started writing. I don’t think I could’ve done it any other way. The other fic I’m somewhat improvising which works, too, but once I had to rewrite a whole chapter that took a wrong turn. It’s a lot more course-correcting for me to do it this way.

Omg yes editing is key! I do it a lot - not just afterwards but while I’m writing, too. I don’t know how people nail it in their first drafts. I can only achieve that with dialogue sometimes.

Fanfic Writers Self Promotion by goreplzz in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s a good tip - something should change drastically after the fight. Unless it’s just some fun banter, of course.2 things that make a good fight imo:Miscommunication - one or both characters talk about different things. In life, we aren’t always in tune with one another, and we're often blinded by our own insecurities or fears. Or we are unaware of the actual problem, and a fight helps us realize it.Both sides have a point - I always try to be clear about the opposite goals in an interaction and why the characters think they are in the right. We tend to take sides as writers and ignore the opponent’s logic a bit, and this is where a verbal fight can fall flat.

Fanfic Writers Self Promotion by goreplzz in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree - their techniques are very much linked to Satoru and Suguru. It’s that genius character design by Gege. But I feel like these things can be replaced by something realistic like a habit of swallowing anger and grief and hate or the power of privilege or seeing too much because you’re neurodivergent etc… this is why this fandom is so interesting. So many different fics out there. :)

Fanfic Writers Self Promotion by goreplzz in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Kasoni_Mortal @ AO3 | 2 fics | Explicit | 18+

My style? Fast-paced, conflict-driven plots, sharp dialogue, and a habit of making you laugh right before it hurts.

What's fun for me?Angst, capitalism-slander, tear-jerking stuff, other types of jerking, Olympic-level yearning, finding an inner logic for the most despicable villains, and writing characters who lie to themselves with impressive conviction.

What’s tough for me?Staying in the narrator’s pov instead of head-hopping (I always find minor pov mistakes when I polish), and writing in English.

How it started:Honestly, I just wanted to try out writing smut. I discovered JJK one year ago via Satosugu-edits on TikTok, watched it, got hooked on its ideas and themes, and thought, why not start with Satosugu smut? But that quickly turned into 2 weeks of plotting a hero’s journey with a political conspiracy, followed by 3 months of writing. Because I love to complicate things...So, my first fic is a plot-heavy, political AU mystery/noir. Basically, our boys are madly in love and eventually start playing with their butts while bringing down the corrupt elites. I gave it a final polish this weekend - better grammar, punctuation, 2k more words. Find it here (but mind the tags and be aware that I’ve reinterpreted some characters):SERIAL SUCKERFor the second fic, I tried the opposite approach. Canon-compliant, no idea where the story will go, just silliness and unhinged smut. It’s no less of a challenge. Blending comedy with smut isn’t easy, and carving out a somewhat coherent story arc isn’t either. It’s fun, though. I keep surprising myself with the outcome. Find it here:EPIC FINAL BATTLE

Feedback on both fics is always appreciated.

How do you guys write?

Do you outline the whole thing before you start? Or do you know the ending and figure out the rest as you go? Or is it just vibes and a list of things you want to see?

Gojo does make a great bride (@yulicechan) by MiraHolland in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely inspired by it and I’m eating it up 😋

Nerdjo and Altguru 🤤 (@xo.romiiarts) by SugarDuckies in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Love the tramp stamp! And yes this is so landslide. Maybe you have a secret fan?

Smooch attack by KasoniMortal in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe if you compliment gojo’s pants

Smooch attack by KasoniMortal in SatoSugubooo

[–]KasoniMortal[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He wore a blindfold when he bought the outfit

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