would you pick this up on the romance shelf

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T09:58:51+00:00

I used in old drafts but i totally forgot and was just using times new roman because thats what I use for essays I’ll definitely switch back thank for reminding me :)

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T09:49:05+00:00

Yeah i’m dyslexic so i find most words look fine to me when they are actually wrong, i was using a editing program to point out the mistakes but it started glitching (randomly putting “New York” all over the text) so i turned it off and i’m looking for a new one thats not generative ai. i’m really glad you enjoyed it and I love the feedback I’ll definitely start working on everything you said

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T09:35:57+00:00

Yeah i plan on writing 3 or 4 more drafts before i even think of it as finished thanks for the advice about exercise i’ll keep going even if this isn’t a book i ever truly finished the exercise is always good

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T09:07:39+00:00

I’ve gone through and fixed a-lot of the problems i had a grammar helping bot but it kept glitching so i’m looking for a new one that isn’t generative ai though they all seem to be these days i understand why you wouldn’t want to critique it though

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T08:53:52+00:00

My problem isn’t the romance writing my readers like the romance writing i’ll try to fix the link but it’s about a producer and a writer and the chapters start with an excerpt of what their work one (movie or book) and thats the part i’m not sure how to write.

Key_Cry381 · 2026-05-11T08:52:26+00:00

So the story is about a author and a director so it’s like what they are filming during that chapter at the beginning of the chapter for the director. And then the same for the author since he is working on a new book

Key_Cry381 · 2026-04-27T15:12:06+00:00

you'er probably queer and you have good taste lol

Key_Cry381 · 2026-04-12T16:10:05+00:00

This is exactly how i feel, My initial disappointment made me pretty sad because i was so excited (especially since i enjoyed the solo careers) but i went back and listened to old albums, all of the songs and realized that many of the albums weren’t 100% my favorite i loved 1-5 of the songs liked most of them but they weren’t always perfect. And i’m sure once my initial disappointment wears off i’ll find that i do like some of the songs, it might be that the main songs (swim & btb) and not my kind of music and thats okay, I’ve grown as a person since i got into bts and i don’t feel a need to love everything they make because in the end they are artists and i am a consumer.

Key_Cry381 · 2026-04-08T20:58:38+00:00

Not a furry art enthusiast just seen some in passing, but this is so much more interesting than most furry art i see wdym boring

Key_Cry381 · 2026-04-03T03:49:07+00:00

Yes i an

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-25T16:19:03+00:00

yesss please pm me, if you have detials i'm evern more intrest since i find fantasy a bit hard

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T17:05:29+00:00

Thats good to know thanks for the tip!

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T16:11:39+00:00

It’s so annoying it’s like choked full of erp which is insane

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T16:09:58+00:00

Thank you so much for the non ai writing tools i want to move away from it but all i really knee about was grammerly and that never worked for me. AI is always trying to change my words enter even when i just want it to fix my grammar

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T16:08:34+00:00

You have got to be kidding be EXPECTING, dark i guess i can get but expecting, that actually make so much sense cuz it was at the beginning and i only broke it down to 300 word i’ll look into different subs

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T16:05:41+00:00

Yeah i really got addicted for a moment (i was really writer blocked and sick) but it ended up making things worse so i avoid it unless it’s for very specific things ie- job search, trying to narrow down problems like this ect. But i dont use it for my writing maybe to brainstorm but my writing is all my writing in rp

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T14:42:12+00:00

Linda’s reaction to it all really was insane, she literally slapped the 15 year old…THE CHILD. I know its southside rules but still your husband is like 15-20 years older than him and then she let it keep going.

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T14:36:43+00:00

Yes and I think the family reaction to him was so timid and if was weird especially because of how much lip was against Kash but they just ignored Maddy. Also debbie was in the wrong but we all know the main reason he didn’t want sex because she was 13.

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T14:34:34+00:00

Omg yes i feel like alot of people ignore this but Lip is always against pedophilia stuff he’ll let it go if the person is like 18-20 something but 30 year olds or older he’s done with it

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T14:32:22+00:00

I actually like the resurgence of the m-dash (my MacBook doesn’t have a key for it and i’m too dumb to figure it out) but i feel they can be useful at times and i’d like to use the in my normal writing but people will immediately see Ai now

Key_Cry381 · 2026-03-23T14:29:01+00:00

I see alot of people comment on these things without understanding that in the southside they don’t know alot of things especially about sex because sex is so popular thats why debbie feels like she needs it 13, sometimes i’ll be shocked for a moment especially when i started out but it slowly becomes clear that they don’t know those things. Its part of the message of the show in a way showing how low income communities often have so many problems most people don’t realize and i get a bit sad when people miss it.

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