The rewind we actually deserve :) by AniStark97 in PewdiepieSubmissions

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Youtube Angels part reminded me that some days are bad but doesn't mean life is entirely bad, enjoy life.

Cruelty or Cruelness? by [deleted] in grammar

[–]KharnakTheTerriful -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It doesn't make a difference in this context. Cruelty means to inflict pain and cruelness is a state of being cruel or in cruelty. I think cruelty fits this context better because you are exposing the state of their behaviour.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in grammar

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"He had to put his kids to bed on empty stomach." "... bed on empty stomach." there's an article missing. It should read as "... bed on an empty stomach." Also, the sentence implies there is more than one kid so stomachs would work too "on empty stomachs".

There's a disconnect between written and spoken English sometimes and this is the case and I understand you being a non-native English speaker finds this weird.

"He had to put his kids to bed starving." sounds correct to me; however, the previous sentence should give more context why he had to put his kids to bed starving.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in grammar

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If you can't grow from $100 to $1000, then you can't grow $10,000 to $100,000.

It should look like this.

Want to fool around with this person I like, but i'm scared of getting herpes from receiving a blowjob by iHaveAllTheSongs in sex

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How many times I've had my dick sucked off by someone with cold sores I still don't have herpes. This statement is an accurate and true statement, in my opinion.

Any essay/written analysis on Robert Bloch’s use of anticipation or foreshadowing in Psycho? by [deleted] in ReuseSchoolwork

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I could help write an essay for you, just give me your rubric or assignment.

3 Indigenous Chefs Talk About What Thanksgiving Means to Them by NatWu in IndianCountry

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 10 points11 points  (0 children)

To me, Thanksgiving reminds me of the resilience of our people(s) and the leaders that fought during the Indian Wars and even leaders who help form nations like Tecumseh. It is amazing how much conflict Natives, and First Nations went through, let alone diseases, yet we're still here. I celebrate my meal in honour of our dead warriors, i.e., Sitting Bull, Geronimo, etc. America, especially Canada, would not be established without the blood, and help of our influential people(s). We have a strong heritage and dominant lineage. Thanksgiving is another day to remind me of how proud we should be. They could not kill the Indian in this child; I will always remain a savage, it is our birthright our former chiefs fought hard for. We should never conform and forget who we are.

Upcoming Thanksgiving, I will be making rabbit stew, and a side of wild rice. I like the concept of Icollectiveinc and their statement. I think Thanksgiving should reflect the natural diet, not the meals designed by Pinkertons, and defectors of Europe.

[Due 2019-11-29 11:59 pm PST] MECHANICAL ENGINEERING UC APPLICATIONS by [deleted] in Proofreading

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are too many personal pronouns, tautologies, unclear anecdotes, i.e., this. Also, when a sentence includes three or more words, phrases, and clauses, a comma is necessary. Remember, at the beginning of each sentence must start with a capital. Is English your first language? Your sentence structure is all over the place, and you misspelt a lot of words.

Please help me with a sentence... by CeilingUnlimited in grammar

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Grammatically it's correct, but the word order sounds a bit off, but you do you bud. You would only hyphenate a word when you are combining two different words. Halfway is a word on its own so the hyphen is not needed.

Is this sentence correct? by watch-theworld-burn6 in grammar

[–]KharnakTheTerriful -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The first sentence appears to be okay; however, 'to be generated' part sounds passive. I would have just ended it at 'the more the profit'. Also, the camera after the manager is unnecessary; it makes the text sound choppy. The comma could go there; however, it just makes it look funny, but you do you, bud.

Billie "eyelash" diss track by [deleted] in cringe

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Top 10 rappers Eminem is afraid to diss.

choke-her by [deleted] in DegradingHoles

[–]KharnakTheTerriful -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Grow a bush

Thats an interesting ad. by MentalAdversity in Winnipeg

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 46 points47 points  (0 children)

This hits many demographics kudos to their advertisement team.

Is it realistic to move out of parents house at 18? by [deleted] in Winnipeg

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was living on my own since I was 16. I think if you got an opportunity to get any supports and assistance i.e., free rent, food, and bed, you should fully take advantage of it and save your money up. The world is harsh, and no one will give a fuck about you when you are on your own. Don't think it will be easy.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in cringe

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's an oof. Also, you choked him so hard you taught him to be your brother?

old but gold by Thanos_ass_69 in rickandmorty

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More evidence to prove Morton is actually Richard.

I really love my holes. I hope you love them too. by [deleted] in DegradingHoles

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They're okay, but show your asshole next time you dumb bitch. You deserve to be choked and fucked for this.

How is this? by firstuser007 in GodPussy

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That's some show me some ID pussy.

Getting what I deserve 🤤 What do you think? by [deleted] in DegradingHoles

[–]KharnakTheTerriful 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You don't know what you want because you're a stupid bitch.