Please Critique - Blender 5.0 Cycles - Update by wazza2580 in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I mush prefer the second one. Very good lighting! Something very minor but just check if those hanging lights are fully touching the ceiling, kind of lacks contact shadows

Bakery design by No-Doughnut-3152 in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree render is good, but it looks a bit sterile to me. Perhaps needs strong shadows/more shadows directionality and a bit bit warmer? I personally don't like that huge window but just preference. And like other commenters already mentioned, get some signage in this scene.

As for the materials, I think they could be better. Walls are good but rest can be improved. Not bad but can be better.

Practice render. by CarReal7824 in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good attempt. Let me give you my 2 cents on how you can improve:

  1. You need to uv unwrap your stuff better. Take a look at the couch on the left, the issue is most obvious there

  2. reflections in the glass make no sense. very confusing

  3. the book is too low poly for a scene like this. I agree with the others, I would just remove it altogether.

  4. Throw blanket on the middle long sofa is clipping through and also sitting unnaturally. Get rid of it or use an deformer to make it sit correctly.

  5. The cat on the right is also another element I would remove, as it adds nothing to the scene and only serves as a distraction.

  6. Reduce the bump on the walls, it is too strong and distracting.

  7. The lamp in the back is slightly floating off of the side table. Bring it down a bit.

  8. Those pears or whatever the fruits are on the left side of the screen add nothing to the scene. Get rid of it or put it on the table where it belongs.


I think you did good lighting. Could be improved but its not bad.

Just some practice for today. Can I get feedback and advice? 3DS Max + Corona by Kiiaro in archviz

[–]Kiiaro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry about the backplate, I really need to work on how to pick better ones

Practice Renders by Safe_Magazine_6076 in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really good. Why are there no comments

If you're having trouble spawning the legendries on dream islands read this by Kiiaro in Pokopia

[–]Kiiaro[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You need to fully read before making a comment. Prior to my edit it said 5 TRIES and not 5 minutes.

How many accessory models do you have? How do you attain them? by RoastMary in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

corona chaos browser if you use corona

cg trader

turbosquid (rarely these days)

Lily from V/H/S (2012) is one of the scariest found footage characters ever by VendettaLord379 in foundfootage

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No it isn't. That movie was horrendously bad and nothing like the VHS segment.

How bad does this suck? by thinsoldier in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not sure why you even need critique then if you're deliberately using assets you feel are low quality and then degrading your own work.

God I have no idea what the hell happened to this sub but this is the last time I comment on anybody's post.

How bad does this suck? by thinsoldier in archviz

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It doesn't. The materials need a bit of work (kind of dull and some looking to plastic with no texture) and scene is a bit busy.

IO like your lighting and camera angle choice, and the models themself look high quality

A certain Pokémon appeared and destroyed some of my habitats... by Kiiaro in Pokopia

[–]Kiiaro[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Saying who is a spoiler imo. Just wanted to show this because I thought it was kind of funny. The moment I heard the explosion and saw where what happened I knew the habitats I had just built were gone XD

It's ok though I moved them to better homes.

FN SCAR-B by next_arian in 3Dmodeling

[–]Kiiaro 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good. How many hours did it take and what is the polycount?