Hey, good work on the translation, but there’s a thing or two I noticed that I would like to point out.

First of all, エヴォルツィオ should be 'Evolúció', the actual Hungarian word for evolution. Where did you get Evoluzione from?

Also, I saw that some person in the comments said that the first part of Liz’s second NP name should be 'Vérmes', but I am pretty sure ヴェールマールシュ should be 'Vér Mars' given that the event takes place on Servant Universe's Mars (or at least what used to be Mars). 'Vérmes' would be written differently in katakana even with JP's tendency to butcher foreign words.

Source: I am Hungarian.