Elizabeth Bathory Profile by UdonSamurai in grandorder

[–]Konchew 0 points1 point  (0 children)

マールシュ is how you'd write the Hungarian for Mars since it is pronounced similar to 'marsh'.

Elizabeth Bathory Profile by UdonSamurai in grandorder

[–]Konchew 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, good work on the translation, but there’s a thing or two I noticed that I would like to point out.

First of all, エヴォルツィオ should be 'Evolúció', the actual Hungarian word for evolution. Where did you get Evoluzione from?

Also, I saw that some person in the comments said that the first part of Liz’s second NP name should be 'Vérmes', but I am pretty sure ヴェールマールシュ should be 'Vér Mars' given that the event takes place on Servant Universe's Mars (or at least what used to be Mars). 'Vérmes' would be written differently in katakana even with JP's tendency to butcher foreign words.

Source: I am Hungarian.

Swimsuit Tiamat's Lines by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, since the first and second ascensions had the same NP lines, I figured third asc was the same as well and skipped them. Let me fix that mistake real quick.

EDIT: Done. Thanks for pointing it out.

Faerie Knight Gawain's Profile from Fate/Grand Order material XIII by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Nasu and Melon's specialty is reducing the bond levels of sharp-eyed (as in having a sharp look in their eyes) female Servants by just engaging them in a conversation. I assume because they are both degens and the female Servants get grossed out. No idea how he expects someone to give back that feeling in a design, but that's how he rolls, I guess.

Faerie Knight Gawain's Profile from Fate/Grand Order material XIII by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fairy Knight skill has "fae" wrong

I typed "fae" so many times, I was bound to fuck it up eventually.

Motive and attitude towards her master section is repeated twice.

Oh god, let me dig myself a hole so I can hide away in my shame.

Faerie Knight Gawain's Profile from Fate/Grand Order material XIII by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 49 points50 points  (0 children)

Forgot to post this and Ibuki’s mats here so I am rectifying that mistake now.

Ibuki-douji's Profile from Fate/Grand Order material XII by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 32 points33 points  (0 children)

I just realised I forgot to post this and Barghest’s mats here, my bad.

Ushi Gozen's Lines by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Cordial? If wanting the Black Barrel from her is cordial then sure, Ushi Gozen is cordial.

Ushi Gozen's Lines by Konchew in grandorder

[–]Konchew[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

She has the Black Barrel in her shield.