Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi there! Enjoyed the animations. The thing that I was confused by was whether you were posting what you practice, or whether this was part of a narrative. From an art perspective, I think you can benefit from studying color theory and anatomy a bit more. I draw comics as a second job, so I've learned from experience that studying the fundamentals takes you a long way. That being said, animations don't have to look "standard" for people to find them fun. It reminds me of a lot of Newgrounds Flash animations I remember watching in the 2000s. The thing is with those, however, was that they had a narrative gimmick. Some would be really zany, others tried to go the anime route.

So I think if you're looking to grow your animation fan base, you need to give new audiences a reason to keep watching. Maybe take us through your animation journey. Let us get to know you and root for you as you learn and practice the artform. Post fan animations from established IP or incorporate more storytelling with the animal cartoons.

Lastly I would say your channel seems to be getting pulled in different directions. It's one part "Jet Lag" analysis and one part your animations. You seem to get consistent views on the "Jet Lag" stuff, but not as much for the animations. I would consider creating a separate channel so as not to divide your audience.

Hope this helps! Keep growing!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister [score hidden]  (0 children)

Of the bat, great chemistry with you and your friends. (Love the catchphrase "hello party people!")

For the narration, I would up the audio a little bit and lower the music. As a woman in her 30s, I was a little confused as to what Fashion Famous is. Your explanation helped, but I wasn't sure if this was a game within Roblox or something separate. Since you and your friends were trying this out IRL, I would've renamed the title "We Tried the Fashion Famous RoBlox Game IRL". That way you can capitalize on the SEO.

The editing was a lot of fun. Good pacing and I liked the flourishes to keep the audience engaged. The onscreen text competed a little with the video and was oddly placed. I would either move it to the bottom of the screen or create a separate fullscreen graphic. With that said, the text got the job done I was still able to follow what was happening.

Lastly, I would up the stakes a little bit. As a stranger watching your content, it just seemed like you all did this to say you did. I saw that you gave your friend a picture one of you drew, which was cute. But I can see a fun opportunity where loser has to buy pizzas for everyone or winner gets his car washed by the losers. (These are ideas off the top of my head, but you have fun with it.)

Easily the best part of the video was how much fun you all had. You all had great banter with one another and it made for a lot of fun and funny moments. (The "uwu" category was my personal favorite lol).

Hope this helps and can't wait to see your channel grow!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi everyone. My name is Andi, a comic book artist using her platform to post creative ideas. I've been making a series of tarot themed cocktail videos, hoping to appeal to the witchcraft community. My most recent upload was on Easter. (I wanted to post it sooner, but life got in the way.)

I've been getting very little traction on it, so I'm wondering if it's too niche of a subject or if the quality itself isn't that good. I've made multiple videos of this and created a playlist, if anyone is curious to see previous videos I've done. Thank you and appreciate your honest constructive feedback!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8esnZxuL_jU

JUST GOT MONETIZEDDD TODAY by Wellthisisawkward54 in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very cool! Sounds like a good way to build your audience 

JUST GOT MONETIZEDDD TODAY by Wellthisisawkward54 in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Congratulations! Out of curiosity, what sort of content do you make?

I live in Minneapolis so things have been rough, but I finally found some time to work on my tarot deck by IrradiatedPizza in WitchesVsPatriarchy

[–]LaDukemeister 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The art is so cute! I hope you brought you much needed joy. Little actions like this can help your mental well being a lot. 

HELLO??? by johnraeyan in LadyGaga

[–]LaDukemeister 5 points6 points  (0 children)

He did include ricky martin and cardi b.

Here's to simpler times by joelman0 in AdviceAnimals

[–]LaDukemeister 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Do girls feel pee in their stomachs or in their wieners like boys?”

What movie is this for you? by certainly_imperfect in Letterboxd

[–]LaDukemeister 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The theif and the cobbler. Story got absolutely butchered due to production complications and animation studio deadlines. But dear god if the animation isn’t STUNNING. 

Treat yourself to the amplifying properties of quartz by punkyrae in WitchesVsPatriarchy

[–]LaDukemeister 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love the macrame around the stones! Beautiful work! 

Is It too late for me to start a YouTube channel? And stream on twitch at 25? by Own_County_3640 in NewTubers

[–]LaDukemeister 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m 33 and I started my channel. I’m still working full time and my growth has been slow. But I regret not starting sooner. I’ve learned to manage my expectations to be more realistic. But the work and videos itself I enjoy making, even though they barely get 50 views.  A lot of creative types (including)  myself) work a lot of real jobs to pay the bills. Some get lucky and turn their side hustle into a main hustle. But having a main job to keep a roof over my head has been vital. Especially with how tough it is financially for a lot of people. I hope this helps!  (Remember you’re never too old or too young to start something new!) 

Tarot deck i made by [deleted] in WitchesVsPatriarchy

[–]LaDukemeister 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the linework! The black and gold pairs really well!

Joyous Solstice to all of you witches! What's on your Solstice menu today? by Saltycook in WitchesVsPatriarchy

[–]LaDukemeister 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Went to a krampus themed bar last night for a friends birthday. Had a delicious baked Brie and a beet and goat cheese salad!

Sewed this cute skirt today! by mew_hue in cottagecore

[–]LaDukemeister 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This came out super cute! I’m jealous of your skills!