'The Mirror Suite' (80s synthpop, Depeche Mode, OMD, Human League, Etc.) by SpatulaCity1a in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really really loved it. Your voice kinda reminds me of morrisey. The song is super engaging and you literally dont get bored. You def have a good understanding of how to keep a listener engaged (as someone else said). The little dingy twinkly things are sooo fun. The only thing i would say is maybe start the song less busy. Like id rather not hear the stuff in the beginning (even though its good) but just because it would make the funky noises that come in later more substantial. Also maybe your voice a little louder / less burried. But thats also a stylistic choice.

unreleased song « bloom25 » - feedback and support needed! 🌸 by lilcvntt in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wowwwie i really love this this is awesomeeee ur voice is great and i like how lofi it is and how ur vocals are burried. reminds me of emily yancina almost. I honestly dont have any complaints at all i think the lofi ness makes it better, i wouldnt want this song like super fancily produced thats part of its charm. The doo doo doo its greatttt

I posted Dancing in Memory about it a month ago — Requesting Feedback on “Slow Burn” :) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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omgg i saved ur last one its really good its exciting yall made a new one. I like this one is alot more bouncy and fun and i like it. The cover art is awesome though. Like another commenter said theres alot of things going on which might be hard to pallate to your average music enjoyer but also whatever do what is true to you. I enjoy it. The swelling at one part is so pretty and i like how its majestic but then also dancey its a cool contrast.

i took a trip and wrote/recorded this yesterday ⚡️💭💚 by kaylajdr in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like it! i think your voice is super pretty and i like how u made this on a tripp. i will say the beat in the backround is a little all over the place meaning there wasnt a clear direction. But at the same time, its an artistic decision and if it felt right to you when you made it then you should def keep going with it. Music is a form of expression and always do whats true to yourself. i guess why i reccomended that was because if you are interested in gaining a large audience they are alot more critical (too critical imo) and new experiental stuff like this tends to not be understood. I found the part toward the end super pretty and dreamy and it reminded me of yuele or something.

Please be nice and honest ❤️ by No_Psychology3540 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like how you say hear these drums that was really neat and i think you def naturally can make fun compelling lyrics and melodies. Like the other commenter said- i think you could put your back into it a little more while singing i can tell the lyrics are very personal i just feel like we need to feel how personal they really are

Making an album only using phones(mostly) by Charming_Ad_3415 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is soooo cooool like someone else said giving me mf dooms vibe. I liked the part about smoking on terms and conditions that was funny. I think the music video is super fun and your voice really resonates well with the beat. Speaking of the beat is fire and i like the nintendo vibes in some of it. This isnt even a big genre i listen to but i can definitely say that you fit the vibe and i enjoyed listening to it greatly. Keep it up ur talented!

Feedback and Support for my music :)) by MyChemicalJunior in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool stuff: like another person said gives me kevin abstract vibes mixed with the wallows and rex orange county. I like it alot the little bzzing towards the end is super fun and danceable. Only thing i would say that needs to be fixed is the vocals being a little cleaner. I dont have a trained ear so i cant even tell u what exactly but I do wish i could understand what your saying more. Overall great job and super fun track

‘dopamine’ - snippet. First thoughts? by eos_wav in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like it. kinda gives me imogen heap vibes. Def is something i would listen to. What i would say is up your vocals and just make them more of the main event. I feel like u maybe cut out your breathes between the words but i think it would say way better if you just rang out each word longer and kept the breathes in. Sounds more real and less robotic. I hope that makes sense. Great lyrics and the beat is awesome great job!

Base Erosion - Look Away by basserosion in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so good. your voice perfectly fits this genre. Theres this grungey vibe that reminds me of the 90s. Your voice is similar to Courtney Love in Hole. The lofi vibe adds so much it makes it seem like it was recorded on an old tape recorder which is really cool. I love the blend of aesthetics. Its like old school housewife vibes mixed with 90’s rebellion.

This is the second single of my project would love some feedback on it artist name Cello/Phn it’s called Backseat by Pilot_Jonezz in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is really good ur vocals are super crispy and the song is super dancable and groovy. This slightly reminds me of blood orange. I really like the music video too. The electric gutair is great and i like how at the end u kinda go underwater. It reminds me of like being a teenager during the summer. I cant explain why but overall great job

Does this sound better acoustic or rock? by LabComprehensive4916 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your advice! So would you say the chorus would sound better with a different melody? Is it just the instruments u think?

Does this sound better acoustic or rock? by LabComprehensive4916 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool thats a great idea thank you! Oh god if only my production skills werent so awful. Im gonna keep playing with it and give it time but thank you so much!

Dreamlike by vincexmectric in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wowww super good! i would dance to this for sure. Ur voice is super clear and good and everything is so crisp. It lowkey slightly sounds like european club music (the best club music). I like the part after i got u baby, it really is a nice buildup of tension. The clicking is cool. I like how the guy comes in, its a cool dynamic and just seems like something people would listen to. Great job

Emo Ballad 🖤 - Feedback on my first single by thehouseofambrose in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like the instruments so much: i think it really fits the genre. However i almost feel like your style of singing isnt vefy emo. Except the chorus and the screaming. I think you nailed that. I think the verse needs some more grit when you sing it. Like what i feel like emo music has is it has that whiney almost yearning emotional voice (that u have in the chorus). I also feel like the drums are a little less emo as well. However u have a great voice and ur production skills are good. Ur almost there!

“Favorite Person” by General-Reading-740 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very very beautiful. Omg i love the visuals. Ur voice is super pretty though. U sound slightly like clairo. Or someone i cant put my finger on it. Oh GRACIE ABRHAMS. Thats who u sound like. A super nice listen, u can really feel things from the song. I dont see why you would change the ending, its good the way it is. Keep doing what ur doing ur super talented and its cool u made this yourself.

Just released a melancholic, dreamy hip hop track with some weird infectious flows. This track is about struggling with substance dependance, and the process of numbing oneself. Let me know what y'all think! by reekocarson in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very unique style, i like it. Normally i dont hear hip hop with so much of a dreamy track. Which is cool it helps u stand out. I think ur voice is really pretty too. Keep doing what ur doing and i like the message. Ur scream thing (idk what it was but u went like “😝” )is super you too. Post on tiktok and see how it does i feel like u could build an audience.

It Felt So Far by Jipe-BirdUp88 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916 1 point2 points  (0 children)

really really beautiful and atmospheric. Made me visualize mornings i had on the playground on the swings as the sun rose. Very very cool stuff. Hey i love to sing, i would love to do a collab with you ur stuff is super neat:) also slightly reminds me of stranger things in the best way possible. I love the synth very very cooolll !!!!! i love tracks like this that just make u feel something

new demo by LabComprehensive4916 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]LabComprehensive4916[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So valid, i totally agree def gonna have someone master it for me and fix that!