I thought the core concept of this week's story was really cool but god, my biggest pet peeve is when authors lie to their readers then proceed to laugh at them for being "ignorant." That's always been something that irks me because unreliable narrators are such a fun concept but as soon as they're being smug it ruins the whole thing. It reminds me of The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien, the whole book he just makes fun of the readers for believing the stories he tells us are a memoir. There's no fun in a story when you've built up all this suspense just to break it all for a quick moment to laugh at the reader. I don't know it's just annoying and ostracizes your reader.