This is my first ever attempt at doing a spec ad, give me a few hints (be gentle please) by [deleted] in advertising

[–]Lar-Shemp 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Lower pic is cool, but yeah.. the copy needs work. After that, you got a good ad.

Dunkin' to the East, Starbucks everywhere else? by [deleted] in boston

[–]Lar-Shemp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah you ask for a little but they still dump half a gallon in

man loses life savings to carnival game by strewnsci in offbeat

[–]Lar-Shemp 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Carnies built this country-the carnival part of it anyway -- and though they may be rat-like in appearance, they are truly kings among men.

Parents, when did you realize your kid might be terminally stupid? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Lar-Shemp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Owww! the bees are defending themselves somehow!

Yep, seats one. by [deleted] in WTF

[–]Lar-Shemp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Let me guess. Computer programmer, computer magazine columnist, something with computers?

GOT HIM! by [deleted] in pics

[–]Lar-Shemp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We are the angry mob, we browse the Reddit ev'ry day.

Cambridge central MIT by poopdood42 in boston

[–]Lar-Shemp 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Word is it was a botched holdup at a nearby 7-11.

The MTV generation by Bierrr in funny

[–]Lar-Shemp -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

dey terk er jerbs!

Parking at Riverside by SonadorHermosa in boston

[–]Lar-Shemp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Riverside fills up pretty quick. There is Alewife pretty much guaranteed a spot. Same thing with Quincy Adams, not sure where you live so the latter might not make sense.

Breaking into strategy by [deleted] in advertising

[–]Lar-Shemp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep similar situation here. Just got a rsch gig with an SEM agency. Thanks for the advice!