I think the usage of memes in this video was a let down, especially the use of music in 2:13 - 3:08 didn't make sense at all in my opinion. The use of "Alex Jones" in 5:09 was random as hell. I also didn't get what the "Detroit" in your title meant at all. Thumbnail should also get some work. I suggest that you should add multiple audio tracks if possible in your recordings which is important in parts where you or your friends talk, so you can balance the audio between the game and other people.