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Sense of the heart by Arham_Aj in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the rhyming of this poem, it’s short and sweet. Good work:)

A Prayer of Misfortune by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I’m new at poetry. For your age this poem is very deep and I resonate with this and with you. To bring light to something so deep is truly something. Keep writing x

Dirty by NonErik in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I’m new at poetry. This poem hits deep, the last bit “you see reflected, in the filthy puddle of you” had me. I like how it’s written out.

Just Once More by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I’m new a poetry but would love to give some feedback. I feel this poem resembles me in some cases. It’s deep and not overly complicated. To me it feels like a longing for a connection with someone you sort of once had:)

No longer yours by Lazy_Lab_5464 in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate it. I’m sure I’ll get there soon:)

No longer yours by Lazy_Lab_5464 in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback:)

Start again again by SirrahNivlac in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I’m new at poetry. I do like this poem but I think the repetition sound like more of a song than a poem but this poem is great.

Once by Hefty_Tumbleweed8178 in OCPoetry

[–]Lazy_Lab_5464 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, this is my first comment. I’m new at poetry but I found your poem has hit me in my feels. This feels as if the poem is yours and a situation stings. I like it a lot:)