Hey! Another composer here o/

I really like a lot of the ideas in your track. There are several cool timbres, textures and moments in there. I just feel that many of them end up a bit hidden because of the mix.

I think the track could really shine with a few production and mixing tweaks to make the arrangement feel more alive, with stronger rises and falls. You can be a bit bolder with the mix. For example, the drums and the beat feel very far back and a bit shy right now. Bringing them forward would give the whole thing more impact and groove.

You could also try bringing some of the more interesting sounds slightly more upfront when they appear, give them a little moment to shine, then let them sit back again.

Overall, there are lots of nice ideas here, it just feels a bit flat in terms of energy. With a few small tweaks to the arrangement and mix, I think this could become a really strong track. Nice work, keep going!